Daeus

Here is a question.  How can I make my first chapter grab the reader, but also make it relate to the story and make my reader care about my MC?

@arie-ashira okey-dokey 😉

@alia @seekjustice @jane-maree @ingridrd @notawriter @itisastarrynight @daeus

@epicaddie2 Cool you have a blog! It looks great! I can’t think of any questions at the moment (I’m sure I’ll think of a million as soon as I submit this post), but I thought I’d tag some folks so they knows about your blog 😉

@jane-maree @catwing @seekjustice @rochellaine @skredder @ingridrd @dragon-snapper @dekreel

@jenwriter17 Good idea!  Yes, tag more people please!

@alia ah, yes I think somebody else here mentioned this. it is awesome! 😀 thanks for reminding me, cuz I forgot about it.

@ariel-ashira watching movies with this kind of situation may help, cuz then you can see facial expression and feelings better than a book. since the relationship is a good one between the son and his family like you say, there will most likely be shock and lots of tears. Some people, when they see someone they thought dead for several years,…[Read more]

@alia I know what you mean.

@skredder He had really good relationships with his family before he was taken away.  Good point!

@alia Thanks!

@alia I understand: it’s hard for me to ask Him and be ready to accept that it may not be His will for me to do what I was wanting.

Whoa. This looks so cool, can’t wait to check it out!

Ahck!  And now I have to go.  It wasn’t that you scared me off. 🙂  Might be on later.

@alia They just left, but I am here…

I gotta go now…

@rochellaine @ariel-ashira

@rochellaine I love it! I really like this idea! Are you going to write it after your western?

@rochellaine Yay! I’m reading it now…

@rochellaine yeah I’d love to! 😀 after I read it I have to leave though.

@rochellaine Yes, I read it!!  Its really good.  I hope you will finish writing it when you are done with your western!  My MC girl in The Crimson Cup – her name is Atarah!!!  Only she’s fifteen. 🙂

@rochellaine Yes, I read your comments to eachother.  I read all the stuff on this topic.

Who is Bobert?  I have heard of him before, but I don’t know who he is really.

@rochellaine the one about Judas’ daughter.