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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@sarah-anson Oh I didn’t know you read it! (or maybe I did but I forgot) 😀 Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it.
I just gave you access for chapter 6, and the other links should be earlier in this topic. 🙂 thank you!
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Sink replied to the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
Interesting idea, @skredder. I’ll try it out. Kirin is a great guy, but I really don’t want him to have “Hero Syndrome” (As in he does everything right just because it’s right.). And I also don’t want him to be an anti-hero, because it doesn’t fit. So he needs to have enough moral strength to do the right things sometimes, but he also needs to be…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@skredder Stellar! I should be able to start reading it some time tonight 🙂 I think the pace you’re putting the links out is good, since I’m reading for Seekjustice too.
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Sink replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
Hey @jenwriter17, sorry to bother you again, but would you mind giving me access to all the chapters you have up so far on your book? I requested access for chapter 6 and I’ve read chapter 1, but I can’t see the other ones(forgive me if it’s just something I’m overlooking in Docs, I don’t use them very often, xD). Anyway, happy writing! 🙂
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Sink replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
Ah, I know I just did this, at least last time anyone was on this topic, but talking about my character’s most embarrassing moment was to good to pass up, @daughteroftheking, thanks for just an awesome question. Okay. Here we go.
Kirin: Kirin would rather talk about it, because every time he gets embarrassed it seems to be in front of a bunch of…[Read more]
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Sink started the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
Hello there Kapeefers! I’ve got an… issue with my main character.
He’s naive. And incredibly stubborn, very hardheaded, and just… kind of boring. I don’t even know why. He’s got pretty fleshed out motivations, hopes/dreams/wants/needs etc, but I just can’t get interested in him to actually sit down and write. I’ve been plotting and writing…[Read more]
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Sink replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
Hey there @jenwriter! I read your first chapter, and I really enjoyed it. And I think I just sent a request to access the rest of the chapters… I’m not sure though. My google account doesn’t like me sometimes. 🙂
Anyways, I really liked the first chapter, and I’ve got a few thoughts if you don’t mind me sharing them.
First, I really liked how…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@skredder @seekjustice Here’s chapter 6! 🙂
And fear not, I’ll be putting off writing a little bit to catch up on reading both of your books *cough*because*cough*Seekjustice writes too fast for me to keep up *cough* 😉
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PruwKQKCOSdDVpAvs_Avwubpf4wrdfiW-cFHg_WDtcE/edit?usp=sharing
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine sorry, I can’t write now. Maybe tomorrow evening. 🙂
@ariel-ashira you can create a sidekick if you’d like 😉
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Once and for all I am not heartless and neither are you! Even God kills people when it will glorify him most, and he loves his creation even more than we love our characters! Its the same way when we kill our characters.
Howcome I don’t get a sidekick like Stan or Bobert or Evie?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@sleepwalkingmk @rochellaine I like Sobbin Women a lot. Its especially funny after researching Roman stuff. 😀 I like Wonderful Day a lot too. All thier songs are good though. They have amazing voices!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Oh my…umm, I like Millie and Adam and Gideon a lot. So many of them are funny though! What is your favorite song? @sleepwalkingmk you too
Really, Rochellaine, killing characters is hard, but it can be good.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clean Christian Music in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
@livgiordano Thanks, I’ll check those out too 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
HI ALL! I knew this is a high-traffic topic, so I wanted to let people know here; Nadine Brandes is doing a giveaway on her website for some books by Veronica Roth ( 😀 ). It’s international, so here’s the link if anyone wants to take part:
https://nadinebrandes.com/2018/04/25/veronica-roth-giveaway/
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 5 months ago
@catwing I love those!!! 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine BTW, killing characters is not heartless. Its good writing. I have never thought you were heartless!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia *squeals* I can hardly wait!!
@rochellaine *stares at wall..* you went to bed before we did? This should be recorded…
You like SBfSB?
@daughteroftheking I know its the next day, but I will say hi anyway!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Aaaaand I have to leave again. Bye 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira @seekjustice @rochellaine Well unexpectedly I’m on a bit more tonight. Writing and reading Seekjustice’s part 2 as well. (don’t worry, I’ll try my best to catch up in reading 😉 )
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine You are NOT heartless! I meant that you made it sound like seekjustice was heartless!
@alia I am not prodding you. Im telling you!!! Write it!!! So many of us who are interested or just lead boring lives would find it fascinating!!
Okay, I have to go. 🙁
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