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@aratrea I’ll try to make it.

@f5a8c3e92 Ok, here’s my edits.

Prologue:

A tree loomed up ahead.

This is a drag on the pacing. Remove or see if you can incorporate into the next sentence.

The girl covered her ginger hair

You already said her hair was ginger. No need to repeat.

The corners of Halle’s mouth turned upwards

Replace ‘Halle’s’ with ‘her’.

She wasn’t far fro…

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@emma-flournoy *gasp*

The apocalypse is coming, people. Let’s all bow our heads and pray.

@emma-flournoy Me has problems. :/

@kate-flournoy Good job saving the best for last. That’s always my policy. Patience is a virtue.

@kate-flournoy That’s kinda the problem. Your supporters wouldn’t know you were rebelling till it was all over either.

That’s the way to greet someone @emma-flournoy. Tell them they shouldn’t even be here.

@emma-flournoy 😛 Maybe if the opportunity falls into my lap.

@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 No, not really.

@winter-rose Totally. You can’t fake this thing. It has to be the real you. It’s so diabolical just because it’s not diabolical.

@winter-rose Of course I’d be a kind dictator! I wouldn’t even be a dictator at all. I’d stand for checks and balances in government and all sorts of un-dictator things. I’d just rule the world through influence. I’d also take the whole fireside chat thing to a whole new level. Doing a grill out on the white house lawn? Share professional grilling…[Read more]

@jenali Sweet! Always great to neat an ENFJ. (Actually, I think @his-instrument is an ENFJ too.)

I think what we should do is take over the book market and get everybody to know us. Our books need to be vulnerable and deep too so that people feel they can trust us.

Then we need to try to help people as much with their everyday lives as possible…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Technically. That’s the important word. We’re not technically in control, but we’re not technical people either.

@graciegirl Best would be to just use a google docs.

@f5a8c3e92 Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

I literally got a kick out of you saying ‘learnt’. Thank you for being Australian.

I’m also really excited that you’re learning elvish. I’ve been considering inventing some languages for the fantasy trilogy I’m planning to start in about a month, so you can expect me to endlessly…[Read more]

@graciegirl Really? Could I read it?

@kate-flournoy Ah, you’ve mentioned that before, but this little ENFJ’s memory ain’t too good.

@graciegirl
NF. Check. Think of how he talks with Edwin. It’s very personal. He also sees things in universal terms, not hard facts. Definitely an NF.
E. He speaks readily. He doesn’t have a problem being in the major crowd at Tyburn. He just doesn’t feel introverted.
J. This is the function I’m least good at defining, but I think the fact that…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy I guess this means the INFJ defeated the ENFJ. Well, what do you know? I never thought it could have happened. 😉