@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Daeus replied to the topic Recommendations Requested in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien I feel ashamed that I’m not very well read on poetry. I have a few recommendations though. Two of my favorite poems are 1. Recessional: a victorian ode, and 2. Excelsior. I also like that one by Frost that I can’t remember the name to, but I think it it’s something like “riding through the woods on a snowy evening.” I also like…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic To the End of School *raises glass of Orange Juice* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Yikes!
@kate-flournoy No, it was probably good for my nerves actually.
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Daeus replied to the topic To the End of School *raises glass of Orange Juice* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@emma-flournoy Yep. How it works is you start off in charge of your own education with your parents not monitoring you hardly at all. Then, you make the educated decision that it is no longer worth your time to continue doing math. Therefore, you stop it. Then, your parents figure out a year later that you stopped doing math (even though you had…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic To the End of School *raises glass of Orange Juice* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@emma-flournoy @graciegirl Hey, I don’t hate math either! I actually like it a small bit, it’s just the two hrs a day it took me that I didn’t like. *frazzled face*
I actually quit math my last year of high school. One of the best decisions I ever made.
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Daeus replied to the topic Perfect Parents? in the forum Characters 8 years, 11 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Quick answer: It’s okay to portray anyone unrealistically.
Long answer:
I think what’s going on in your example (not having read it) is that the author is trying to shine the spotlight on Christianity by making it idealistic in their story.
This isn’t really doing what they think it is though. The spotlight is focused in…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Question about the webinar and theme mastery course in the forum Film 8 years, 11 months ago
@graciegirl Yep, it’s self paced.
Hehe! *peeks over a block of cheese as he munches on it* The mini course is just a small teaser. Feel thou teased.
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Daeus replied to the topic Poetry Rythm in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi @emily-d!
Rhythm (aka meter) is a great thing to use even if you also use rhyme. The first thing to do is to learn the basic patterns of meter. You can easily learn about those online. I also recommend the book The Roar On The Other Side to learn poetry.
Five rounds of confetti if you can pick it up in a heartbeat. For me, it was a more…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Websites in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Discord Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Ah, that makes sense.
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Daeus replied to the topic Discord Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@cloudy This basically a video chat thing?
I don’t think I’ll be on it. I need to discipline myself. Video’s too addicting. I might drop in on rare occasions though.
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Daeus replied to the topic Thank you, KP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@emma-flournoy I don’t believe so.
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Daeus replied to the topic Thank you, KP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@Northerner We’re glad to have you. 🙂
Personally, I know I would never be where I am without KP.
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Daeus replied to the topic Balancing Dialogue and Description in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@Holly-Nelson-Gray If you haven’t yet, check out our recently published articles on writing descriptions. I think once you have a full understanding of the potential of descriptions and dialogue, your brain will naturally sort out how to balance them.
Your problem probably isn’t so much that you have too much dialogue, but that you don’t have…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper @graciegirl Stopping a bit early. I edited about 2,100 words.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Back.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Have to go again. Be back in a min.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’m back.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Just a moment. I’ll be back in 5.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@winter-rose @delightinlife @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @jess @audrey-caylin @dragon-snapper @graciegirl I’m writing till 9.
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Daeus replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@emily-d You don’t have to read a mountain of books. The more you can read the better, but 5-10 could get you by. Reading sci-fi to learn about it is different than writing yourself into it. You’ll never know the full potentials of your genre or be able to avoid the way overused cliches unless you read the genre.
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