Daeus

@that_writer_girl @ethryndal @jess @audry-caylin @northerner @graciegirl @winter-rose

Looks like I just missed a session, but I’m here now for about a half an hour.

@delightinlife Prose is writing on the sentence level. It’s how you phrase things. It’s things like showing instead of telling, how you write dialogue, whether you write flowery sentences or short punch sentences. This is opposed to things like story structure character back story which are broad picture writing principles.

@anne-of-lothlorien I think it would be a comfort. Until I got bored. Then I would want something to read.

@anne-of-lothlorien No, I don’t know Spanish.

@anne-of-loghlorien No, I don’t know Spanish.

Signing off, @winter-rose and @jane-maree. I edited 950.

@rachelle Woah! That person has a totally different personality. 😀 lol

Art or photos of yourself are both fine.

@rachelle Hmm. Yeah, I think it would be better to take it down. Red eyes, you know. 😉 I went ahead and took care of it. Keep up with the artwork.

@jane-maree @winter-rose I’m in till nine or so.

@ethryndal I’m going to finish now. I think it was about an hour. I got 1,376 words edited. I may come back later for a short session, but I’m not sure.

@ethryndal Excellent!

@that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @graciegirl @winter-rose @daughteroftheking I’ll be editing for an hour if anyone wants to join.

@that_writer_gifl_99 @ethryndal @gracie-girl @winter-rose @daughteroftheking I’ll be editing for an hour if anyone wants to join.

Signing off now. I’m happy to say I got a whole chapter edited. 😀

@jane-maree @daughteroftheking @graciegirl Right heartily glad am I.

*raises sword* Who will edit with me?!

@ethryndal @daughteroftheking @winter-rose @graciegirl @audry-caylin @that_writer_girl_99

@DaughteroftheKing Bravo! You’ve survived your advice-giving baptism. What you said was very good. Keep at it.