@daeus
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Daeus replied to the topic A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
@emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @his-instrument What about this?
When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?
Matthew has sworn to avenge a murder…
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Daeus replied to the topic A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sold? Not very many. When it was free though, I got something like 2,000 downloads. I haven’t been promoting it really. That’s why I’m trying to revive this ad thing. I actually have time for it almost. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello Fellow Pen Wielders! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
@emerald-flyer Cool dragon. 🙂 May I assume you write fantasy?
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Daeus replied to the topic A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy Got it. I’ll try to come up with something better tomorrow.
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Daeus replied to the topic A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
@his-instrument I think attracting classical lovers is worth losing non classical lovers.
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Daeus replied to the topic A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
@his-instrument Thank. Those are great suggestions.
I do, though, need to have that one liner right at the beginning. The idea is that people have a three-second attention span. They won’t read the whole synopsis unless their attention is instantly piqued. Let me see if I can make the wording work.
A story of action, adventure, and justice,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy Yes, that’s certainly possible. When I read the new first line along with my old synopsis however, it didn’t seem to flow well. Perhaps that’s just me though. The reason I redid the general synopsis was because I wanted the first line of that paragraph to fit with the first line above it. Things kept changing from there.
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Daeus started the topic A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Many of you have read my novel Edwin Brook. Well, long story short, I was experimenting with running Amazon ads on the book and they were not converting. After a consultation call, I determined that I needed to change my synopsis a bit to make it clearer right from the start who the book was for. I came up with something I think will…[Read more]
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Daeus started the topic A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Many of you have read my novel Edwin Brook. Well, long story short, I was experimenting with running Amazon ads on the book and they were not converting. After a consultation call, I determined that I needed to change my synopsis a bit to make it clearer right from the start who the book was for. I came up with something I think will…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello! I'm Aislinn in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi, @aislinn-mollisong. Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.
What’s the premise of your trilogy?
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings, earthlings! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
Greetings, spaceling. What do you eat in space?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@salome01w4g I’d never heard about Egoscue before. That seems pretty awesome!
Exercises certainly help me. At least the right ones do. I had an old chiropractor recommend an exercise that really didn’t help any. I’ve got two I do now though, each three times a day, and they really help. I’m probably about 80% better.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@salome01w4g By “cut on you,” do you mean perform surgery? That’s not necessarily true. My chiropractor gave me an x-ray because he was pretty sure there was something skeletally wrong with me, but he believes you should only get surgery if you have no other options. The idea behind an x-ray is that it can help identify your root problem. Oils and…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@salome01w4g Have you gotten an x-ray?
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Daeus replied to the topic Classic book Suggestions in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
1. The Count of Monte Cristo
2. A Tale of Two Cities
3. Ben-Hur, Cry the beloved country, anything by G.K.Chesterton.If you’ve read the lord of the rings, you should read the Silmarillion too.
Oh, and definitely read crime and punishment! You may like The death of Ivan Ilych as well.
There are more, but those are enough to start with.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@salome01w4g I can totally sympathize. I used to have bad back problems. I still have some pain, but I’m mostly recovered. Feeling discomfort after 30 minutes isn’t abnormal, but if you’re in pain from sitting that long, it sounds like you have back issues. I find that those ball chairs are more comfortable than normal chairs and standing is…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@salome01w4g I worked up to it.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper @jane-maree @winter-rose @graciegirl @ethryndal @salome01w4g I’ll be writing till 8:15-8:30
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Daeus replied to the topic A question for anyone about elves in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Tall, yes. Pointy ears, probably. I like elves to be generally good, but a bit aloof. Grave in council but merry in company. Basiclaly, I like Tolkien’s elves and I don’t want anybody to reimagine them. If they do, they should create a totally different creature.
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