@daeus
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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths Well, anything, but I think particularly descriptions/sentence structure. I want to make sure it flows just right and is easy to envision.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths Yes, I sent it via email. If you haven’t got the invitation, here’s a link to it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ZY5PcSrhX1LdSb69sP_tD4MnPqYZxuCyz6Zwr4i7W8/edit?usp=sharing
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Daeus replied to the topic Story Idea Help!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
Ha! I’m writing a story actually with music based magic, so, yes, it can be done.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths Thanks. Just sent you an invitation to a google doc.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hi in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi, @medomfo. Glad you joined us!
Does the symbol in your profile picture come from anywhere? It just feels like it must belong to some sort of organization.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks!
I just sent you an invitation via google docs.
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Daeus started the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Some of you may remember a while ago when I posted the first chapter of a short story of diary entries from a character in a novel who doesn’t have a name.
I’ve had the story complete for two months or so and I just finally gave it an edit, so now I’m ready to look for beta readers.
If any of you are interested, it’s a truly short…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic HAHA! I DID IT AGAIN! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
That’s not easily done. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Hey Guys…hey…hi…hello in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
@mnvalentine At the moment, I’m writing fantasy too. It’s great stuff! 😀 I consider myself a genre hopper though. I’ve written historical fiction and time travel in the past. I have six fantasy books planned for right now, but once I’m done with those I’ll probably try a biblical fiction trilogy and then who knows what.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hey Guys…hey…hi…hello in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
@mnvalentine Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.
Has nobody asked you yet what you write? That’s what I want to know. I’m impressed you’ve been writing all your life!
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Daeus replied to the topic A Questions About Modesty in Writing in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 years, 10 months ago
@jenwriter17 I imagine the concern is sensuality? That’s the obvious thing to me, but I could conceive other exotic reasons.
I think you could handle it. People have a tipping point. If we didn’t, I’d never step out in public. Â If you’re not being vivid, not providing too many details, you’re not inviting people to go further with it. You set…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic *waves manically* ;P in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
@graciegirl Zikers! Welcome back!!!
I was starting to get really worried you had fallen off the face of the earth.
Things to catch up on? Well, @dekreel just drew a picture of you. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/just-a-bunch-of-stick-people-nothing-to-see-here/
And @sam-kowal wrote a KP Christmas…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Just a bunch of stick people. Nothing to see here… in the forum Art 6 years, 10 months ago
😀 😀 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Ethics, Women, Strength, and Plots in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 years, 10 months ago
I’ll do my best to answer this.
First, what I know the bible has to say about this.
The bible does condemn those who despise authority (2 Peter 2:10).
It also says, “honor to whom honor is due.” (Romans 3:17)
I am not aware of anywhere in the bible that directly says children need to be submissive to adults other than their…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Looking for an Illustrator in the forum Art 6 years, 10 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Looking for editing help in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
Here’s what I’d recommend. You don’t need someone to edit your whole book at this moment. You just need someone to help you with your writing style.
Instead of asking people to edit all 13 chapters, just pick one chapter and ask several people to help you edit it and, most importantly, explain their edits so you can replicate…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic May I say "Hello"? in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine Welcome!
I love Hogan’s Heroes. I must have watched 100 episodes. At least if feels like it. I like Newkirk and Carter the best. 🙂
I am sometimes more comfortable singing when there are strangers around than talking.
lol. I can totally relate. Even when they’re not strangers.
Would it be too bold of me to ask if you could share one…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Here's a Novel Idea… in the forum Questions and Support 6 years, 10 months ago
@leumeister I think somebody tried to do something like this in the past. I’m not sure if it ever happened though.
I think the main downside to it is the time factor. When you can chat with video and live text, you tend to chat a lot more, which many of us don’t have time for.
I could see it as an augment to the forum in some capacity though.
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Daeus replied to the topic Heyo Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi @skredder! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.
You like mysteries? What’s the best one you’ve read?
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Daeus replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 10 months ago
@winter-rose I use the mighty, mighty Canva.
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