@daeus
Active 4 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Daeus replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
@aviantrail Well, that’s an excellent start at least. Hopefully you’ll learn to like him in the next movie.
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Daeus replied to the topic I need help… my character is too withdrawn in the forum Characters 6 years, 10 months ago
@bella-d I could answer this, but I’m most interested in what @kate-flournoy would say since I know she’s faced something similar and overcame it.
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Daeus replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
@aviantrail Welcome. 😀
If you’re a Star Wars fan, would you happen to also be a Kylo Ren fan?
No death threats if you’re not, but I’m just saying. I think he’s pretty cool. 😛 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Salutations! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 10 months ago
@kaya-young Hi! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.
A homeschool grad here. What type of books does Jeff Bridges write?
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Daeus replied to the topic false gods… in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 years, 10 months ago
@alia Oooh. This is a really cool question.
There are a lot of approaches you could take with this. Most importantly, I think you need to think outside the box. Maybe that means reading more widely within the fantasy genre for inspiration. It definitely means asking yourself what if questions.
One suggestion is to make God an antagonist for a…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Cliches of Dystopian Novels in the forum Sci-Fi 6 years, 10 months ago
@jenwriter17 I haven’t really read modern dystopia, but I do get the impression that it has lost something it used to have. Namely, all the early dystopias were prophesies. The authors looked at the culture around them and, knowing what they did of mankind, civilization, and technology, they constructed a model of the future that they thought was…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
lol
A heartless queen of hearts. Haha! -
Daeus posted a new activity comment 6 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ Sure, you can post it here if you’d like or email me. Either way.
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Daeus posted a new activity comment 6 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ Thanks so much! If you can just go ahead and contact me then at daeus(at)thescratchingquill.com, that will let me email you the lessons.
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Daeus posted an update 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi,
Since you started two threads on show don’t tell, I immediately thought of you for this. It’s a bit of a big request, but it could be of real benefit to you too.
As you know, I’m working on part 2 of The Show Dont’ tell Course. Well, I’ve now got all the scripts for the lessons and all the homework written. A few people…[Read more]
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@inkling-for-christ Thanks so much! If you can just go ahead and contact me then at daeus(at)thescratchingquill.com, that will let me email you the lessons.
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@inkling-for-christ Sure, you can post it here if you’d like or email me. Either way.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@emma-flournoy You know what, it’s no trouble. Have your own doc.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OAqB7pb5gPIiym4MdPWFI4vh6YuODlRFQjYcPPWUUpc/edit?usp=sharing
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Daeus replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 10 months ago
@warrenluther04 Posting fan fiction is fine so long as you label it fan fiction.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure. You can share Mallory’s doc if you want. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Alternatives to flashbacks? in the forum Plotting 6 years, 10 months ago
@itisastarrynight I think one big thing that makes flashbacks seem cheesy is when the chapter before the flashback ends with something like, “he remembered the time thirteen years ago when blakedy blank blank…” If you can avoid that, it should really help.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@overcomer Great. 😀
Here’s a doc for you. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BIHK8v-ag07-tPraj6QWrbf_BVN2P_PjySIw87Ljfyg/edit?usp=sharing
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Daeus replied to the topic Short Story Characteristics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@gh24682468999 I don’t recommend making your story short just to write a short story. Make the story as long as it should be. A story should be short when the concept, plot, etc are simple enough that a short story is all that is needed; a story should be long when the concept, plot, etc need more room to flourish.
Setting is important for any…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Email List 101 in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 10 months ago
@jane-maree Yes, well, certainly there can be exceptions, but that’s the general trend. With KP, I know that our emails were read more when we removed all images from them except the picture prompts. That’s with people telling us they liked the pictures in the emails.
I’d recommend split testing it if you’re unsure. Just send out some with images…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Help: Explaining to Math kids in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@aella Yeah, definitely speak in his terms. Don’t try to make him a writer or treat him like a writer, because that’s probably not where his focus should be. He won’t understand the way you think, so you have to understand the way he thinks which is. It doesn’t matter what you value about writing, find what he values and show him whatever ways…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Email List 101 in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 10 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien @mariposa Actually, statistics show that people are far more likely to read an email that has just text. People say they like pictures, but when it actually comes down to it, they distrust emails with pictures in them. Of course, it depends on your niche, but I think it’s most likely your audience will pay more attention to you…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Irrational or Rational? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ I’m not sure that fangirl automatically equals dreamer, but definitely dreaming is not irrational. I’d like to debate anyone who thought so. *roars*
I might come back here and rant about that sometime.
In the meantime though, I think that’s a cool story idea and if you need any help writing guys, I could help. Guys are not…[Read more]
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@inkling-for-christ Sure, you can post it here if you’d like or email me. Either way.