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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @whoever-else
Alright, I finished a couple chapters! I may have Freya’s done by tonight, too, but I’m not really sure yet.
Here’s Zeniya’s:
The sun beat down mercilessly on the Wileny Plains, pulling water out of the ground and the air and drawing sweat to the surface of Zeniya’s fur. She panted, tongue lolling out of her m…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Progress Chat!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
XDXD
Yes! I definitely need some kind of accountability for writing, so we’ll have to figure something out.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Progress Chat!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I would love to join this! I’m kinda going through and figuring out my goals right now, so it should fit. I have, let’s just say… a lot to get done. XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@euodia.vision
I just know that Anika, Falon, Freya, Zeniya, and Jax (because he had to stay with Niya) are in a room. Besides that, I forget where everyone is at.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oooh it’s looking good so far!! 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Rose in Wonderland: A Novel Idea I’ve Been Developing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
*me just now seeing this*
Oooh it looks so cool!! The characters are really well thought out! I’d definitely read this. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
XDXD
Like I said, it’s sort of a rough draft, but yeah my bro mentioned being interested in writing, so we just immediately began planning a book… Which turned into a trilogy XD. We’re working on a bunch of intros right now, because there are… *counts on fingers*… eight fairly even POVs in the first book, seven in the second…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Some of you may recognize a few of the characters in this critique from the Hotel/Wedding RP (though not in this first chapter). My brother ( @orangearmadillo ) and I basically sat down one friday and planned the rough draft of, well, an entire trilogy. The books have not been named yet, but we do know the continent they are on will be called the…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Aaand I gotta go. I’ll talk tomorrow, I guess. 🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ok. Lol it didn’t have to be romantic but whatever XD
@smiley @hybridlore @keilah-h @euodia-vision
Oookay so we’re gonna have to figure out the rooming situation now, cause my bro apparently isn’t RPing anymore. Freya, Zeniya, and Jax are staying on the RP, but I guess Klayden and Soril won’t be. So yeah, they’ll probably just…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay lol. Are you keeping Soril in or not?
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah lol I can’t write romance to save my life… It gets cheesy quick. So I just stick with Freya’s awkwardness and I’m fine that way.
Heh writing a dance… Freya’s gonna just be kind of on the sidelines I think. Niya, I’m not sure.
Ooh I want to see a dance with Nat and Steve too!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Alright that is the extent of my RPing capability tonight. I’ll prbly do more tomorrow tho.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay first of all since when do you like to write romanticish stuff??? XD
Freya
“Ooh, maybe they’ll have a dance tonight. Soril’s really good at tap. Maybe he’ll take Zeniya.”
Freya cocked her head. “Maybe, if they have one. I kind of have a feeling that dancing isn’t really Niya’s thing. I mean, don’t get me wrong, I have…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
“So they’re gonna have a party tonight. You gonna be there?” Klayden asked.
Freya blinked. “Oh. Yeah, I’ll go.” She smiled. “But I want to see Jax in a tie.”
Klayden laughed. “So do I.” He thought for a moment. “I wonder what we’re having for dinner.”
Freya suddenly realized how hungry she was. She hadn’t eaten since last…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
“Ready for the hike?” Klayden asked. “I heard Zeniya and Soril are bringing Jax.”
Freya shrugged, drawing her eyes away from the ring. “I thought I’d just sit and relax for a while, maybe.” She smiled nervously. “My fur is still on end from that wave, and I’m all wet anyway.” She scooted over on the bench. “Care to join me?”
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh alright!!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
Welcome to KP! I’m Solfyre, a homeschool girl just starting in ninth grade! I love wolves, dragons, playing guitar, basketball, writing, reading, drawing, and a lot of other stuff.
And I won’t ask you any questions either lol. (Totally not cause I can’t think of any right now XD)
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Yep!! 😁It was great! We got a lot of work done and had a lot of fun, too.
No problem! It was actually really fun to read through.
And yeah if brain fog stops happening then I’ll try to RP lol
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Writing Biblical Women Characters in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Yes I have definitely noticed this!! Although in my writing I guess I don’t struggle as much because my fantasy world situations are a lot different than on earth… But I do keep in mind the separate roles. The men are all generally protectors, etc… And women are strong in their own way. Most I don’t make as strong in the…[Read more]
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