Kingdom Pen | craftyspacepirates | Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/craftyspacepirates/activity/ Activity feed for craftyspacepirates. Fri, 30 Oct 2026 06:12:09 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 f1127b1ec2a3ec3aa811894665c8625e craftyspacepirates started the topic Waking Sleep in the forum Short Story Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/waking-sleep/ Thu, 29 Oct 2026 19:12:06 -0400 **Hello. I could use some help with flow, grammar, varying my syntax, and whether my ideas were communicated clearly. I don’t really consider this finished, per se, but I do want to see what I need to improve in my writing. Thank you**

Taylor was veiled in white. She soared like an arrow, twirling as she pierced the clouds. White ribbons trailed…[Read more]

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