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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus OH— my goodness. Yes. You’re right. *stares at screen**nervous smile**huddles deeper into blankets and cuddles stuffed leopard* Yeah. He is.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@GracieGirl he seems pretty serious. XD I hadn’t seen it until about a month ago. I’m not a big Disney person, quite honestly. Just never got into it. And Frozen definitely has it’s problems… like Elsa. For a main character, she had some major characterization issues, and… actually no. I’m not going to go that way. WHOEVER WANTS TO WATCH IT,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *opens mouth wide**takes deep breath* ‘LET IT GO!’
*dissolves into a fit of laughter* I’ll say one thing for that song— it’s certainly fun to sing. All those high notes and long holds… *shivers of delight*
And come on. Really. It wasn’t as bad as people make out. I enjoyed it. I mean, for what it WAS— it’s not like high…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *opens mouth wide**takes deep breath* ‘LET IT GO!’
*dissolves into a fit of laughter* I’ll say one thing for that song— it’s certainly fun to sing. All those high notes and long holds… *shivers of delight*
And come on. Really. It wasn’t as bad as people make out. I enjoyed it. I mean, for what it WAS— it’s not like high…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus it wasn’t THAT bad… XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, what’s up with that? Either we’re prancing through a field of flowers, or wreaking havoc throughout the universe!
@graciegirl YES. It’s crazy. :’D Literally the only INFP heroes/heroines I’ve been able to find are Frodo Baggins, Arwen Undomiel, Anne of Green Gables, and one or two others I can’t remember. Whereas the villains… I can…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@GracieGirl ha! 😀 I haven’t read it either. INFP villains do seem to be remarkably prevalent though. It’s scary actually, but since I’ve started looking I’ve found more INFP villains than I have heroes. ;P
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@GracieGirl oooh, actually you know what? You’re right. Good example.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *chokes* I am mortally afeared. XD
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
@theliterarycrusader *salutes* Looks like you’re my boss now. 😀 I don’t think I have your email; should we have @rolena-hatfield do an exchange for us? How do you want to do this?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus wellll… I have an ENFJ anti-hero but he’s not written yet, so… XD
*ahem*
Yes. Let me think.
Hmmmm… *scratches head* You guys aren’t natural villain material.:P The only one I can think of straight off the top of my head is Mr. Waternoose, from Monsters Inc, and then it’s close between ENFJ and ENTJ.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper it doesn’t really matter when you have beta-readers actually. I think it is pretty standard procedure to wait until you’re ‘done’, but in my case the story was so ridiculously long I’ve been sending it out in sections to the first round, hammering the second draft into shape as I go. Once I finish up with that I’ll run through it…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper welllll… generally I’d say if you’re connecting with one character better than the other and giving them more screen time etc., switch MCs because you’ve probably got them mixed up, but it looks like you already tried that.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Short Story Idea (May turn into Novella) in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Cloudy I love her as a villain! 😀 I can think of several ways I would go about making this a short story or novella, but that would be me writing it, which isn’t quite fair. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Swirling Storm of the Writer in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Cloudy I really like the intent/picture of the poem. The only thing I would suggest is either make it more obviously a rhyming poem or more obviously free verse, because I was a little confused by the alternating patterns.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper @GracieGirl @Winter-Rose yep. You said it.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper hey. You do whatever you want and I’m totally cool with that. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper yessssss. Do it. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper and cookies. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 7 years, 7 months ago
@Aratrea my future course? Since I’ve already gone through all my next ten ideas and mapped out their themes in excruciating detail, I suppose you mean more futurely than that… um… continue? XD Pick other stories to pieces and keep learning and applying as I do, hopefully.
Seriously. There are no words for how amazing this was. I am…[Read more]
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Awesome! Thanks. 😀 *resolves to be ridiculously careful about her grammar from now on*