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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Glad to hear it. 😉
Okay. You need help. Just getting to a good place to start? Prioritizing your ideas? What?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Yyyyyes???
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 heh. Yes indeed. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus @That_Writer_Girl_99 can I join you for a bit? I got permission to do some writing in the daytime and so I’m going to be working on my climax until around four. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 here… have a snippet to give you a few ideas.
That was it. They could do whatever they liked about him. But they were not going to touch Denholm. A murderous spark ignited at the base of his throat, and suddenly a great warm, eager humming swelled and filled his mind, pressing outward through the boundaries and seeking an…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 ha! 😀 I can get on board with that… *stands heroically on the verge of a deserted island with the wind streaming through her hair and her weird Jedi robes* May the force be with you. 😛 😉
Ahhhh… yes. Elemental fight scenes. *laughs* I can so relate. The MC of my WIP is also a fire Elemental, though not in the same way…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
@GracieGirl yep. And it’s usually the protagonist. *scowls*
Also, I named the character I chose her for… Ira Netzen. *grins* This poor girl is going to have such a split personality… 😛 XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 well, any backstory you might want to fill in. Hints at the Warden’s involvement with the Elementals. (Which could also double as foreshadowing). Stories about the Catastrophes… little pieces of silence to fill in the things that Matthias knows, as a spy of the Warden, but isn’t allowed to tell the others. Just to deepen the…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
@GracieGirl NO! MINE. *snatches and glares*
XD Okay… I guess… *reluctantly gives her to you* Take care of her though… and if she acts weird on and off, don’t worry, because for me she’s a villain. :’D
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@GracieGirl ah, yes. Homeschooling, as wonderful as it is, can definitely be stressful at times. I’ll be praying. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
The nose too. If you’re brave enough to snarl at yourself in a mirror, notice how the nose humps in the middle and wrinkles at the bridge.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
@Alia *chokes* Erm… haha… XD Well, don’t be afraid to draw it crooked and off center. Sometimes the impression is more important than accuracy. Also don’t overdraw the mouth— a few well-placed lines are better than the whole outline, which can sometimes look static and lifeless. As for snarls in particular… quick hint. More than half of a…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 she could approach Matthias about it… but it would be better, I think, if you did end up having the sparring scene, and as she’s walking in she overhears something, and then tries to get the info out of him while they’re sparring. His continued avoidance will only heighten her curiosity, giving you a great opportunity to get…[Read more]
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Keleigha Liess replied to the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Maybe this is a silly question, but can anyone tell me how to tag people other than typing out the username? Thanks!
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Keleigha Liess replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Leigha stands slowly, & rather breathlessly, brushing fly-away blonde strands from her face. She extends her hand, to @anne-of-lothlorien “Thanks you & welcome! To be honest, I’m thankful we didn’t have to complete such an ‘epic entrance’. I’m Keleigha, but you can call me ‘Leigha’. Say, has anyone seen Katherine or Peace? I haven’t seen them…[Read more]
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Keleigha Liess replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Leigha stands slowly, & rather breathlessly, brushing fly-away blonde strands from her face. She extends her hand, to @anne-of-lothlorein “Thanks you & welcome! To be honest, I’m thankful we didn’t have to complete such an ‘epic entrance’. I’m Keleigha, but you can call me ‘Leigha’. Say, has anyone seen Katherine or Peace? I haven’t seen them…[Read more]
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Keleigha Liess replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Leigha stands slowly, & rather breathlessly, brushing fly-away blonde strands from her face. She extends her hand, to anne-of-lothlorein “Thanks you & welcome! To be honest, I’m thankful we didn’t have to complete such an ‘epic entrance’. I’m Keleigha, but you can call me ‘Leigha’. Say, has anyone seen Katherine or Peace? I haven’t seen them since…[Read more]
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Keleigha Liess replied to the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
A small courier rabbit hops up to @stewie-plotter, drops a note at his feet. It reads, “@ceaseless-prayer sends her heartiest thanks, & some information she has stumbles across, which may be of some assistance in your quest. Unfortunately, @country-kar ‘s username was auto-corrected to @countryman, which may explain the trouble you may have had in…[Read more]
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Keleigha Liess and Josiah DeGraaf are now friends 7 years, 6 months ago
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