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Jane Maree replied to the topic Su cuy'gar! (Translation: Hello!) in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@supermonkey42 WELCOME WELCOME. *shakes your hand enthusiastically* I’m glad you’ve found your way to this part of the internet. 😀
Yay for Star Wars fans! Which is your favourite of the films?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic 2nd person mystery? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus It sounds really interesting. The only experience I have with second-person is Choose Your Own Adventure stories.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus I really like it, I don’t think it necessarily needs anything else. But if you really want something, the thing that comes to mind when you something ominous is (having read some of your story) the image of the goddess the main character keeps thinking of. Though I’m not sure where, or if it would be too in-your-face if you did that.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Fairytale Expectations in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal I guess I automatically assume that the guy will get the girl (or the girl will get the guy, whatever) so it would be a sort of unique twist to make it that they didn’t end up together in the end.
Personally I love it when fairy tale retellings are done in completely different genres. Like a steampunk beauty and the beast or a sci fi…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus it’s pretty cool! You could make the shadows a little heavier which would be a very subtle ominous layer, or add a little shading to the white around the whole picture. Not sure though.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 5 months ago
Hmm… nope, still confused. 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 5 months ago
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily Possibly. But I don’t even really know what the other buttons do. 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily Really wants to mess with the last five green buttons XD
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know about the rest of you, but this whole page is showin’ up weird on my screen. 😛
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Jane Maree replied to the topic So…I need some MORE advice in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@Dekreel I don’t really have problems in this quarter because I’m very good at just ignoring all my horrible mistakes in a first draft. And I also enjoy rewriting the full novel because it’s fun seeing the massive improvement in it. xD But still, I have friends who struggle with this. Three things you can try:
1: (as Kate said) write in…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@Kballen so exciting that you’re doing NaNo!! (I am too.) Like the others have said, having an outline is very helpful, and so is having a group of encouraging buddies who can spur you on in writing. That was one of the things that helped me most. 🙂
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@ingridrd Ooh very nice. I love the colour theme you’ve used.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Favorite Book? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Out of Time trilogy – Nadine Brandes
Songkeeper Chronicles – Gillian Bronte Adams
The Tales of Goldstone Wood – Anne Elisabeth Stengl
The Mission League – Jill Williamson
Ashtown Burials – N.D. Wilson
Storming – K.M. WeilandAnd that’s just scraping the surface of my favourites list. 😛
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Critique this? in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Dekreel to tone it down from being so dark, you could change the aspects of fear and horror/dismay that the tree feels, to a sense of confusion and curiosity. That would shift the mood from ‘scary’ to a much lighter feel.
A way to avoid so much of the human terminology you can use similes instead. Saying “I feel a great, pulsing joy in my heart”…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Oh! Cool. 🙂
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Great! And I hope you realise it’s in edit mode rather than suggest mode. I’ll try to just make comments, but suggest mode is really helpful for making edits that you can later accept or reject.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Dekreel something to think about is that Catcher in the Rye is about a character going on an adventure, and the reader experiencing his thoughts and emotions along the way.
I could list many many books that have this same vague plot. If I look at my bookshelf, there’s half a dozen that I see immediately which I could say had that idea as…[Read more] - Load More
