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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Musicians/Music Artists? in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
That is so cool, Ivy!!! I’d love to hear some of your music!!!
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Magic and Fantasy in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@Sarah:
Thank you for bringing up your concerns and presenting them civilly. 🙂 We’ve had similar discussions on this issue in the past, and I know I speak for the whole KP staff when I say we want KP to be a place for the sharing of many different viewpoints and ideas.
While you make a lot of good points, you also make a lot of assumptions a…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Magic and Fantasy in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@Sarah:
Thank you for bringing up your concerns and presenting them civilly. 🙂 We’ve had similar discussions on this issue in the past, and I know I speak for the whole KP staff when I say we want KP to be a place for the sharing of many different viewpoints and ideas.
While you make a lot of good points, you also make a lot of assumptions a…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Magic and Fantasy in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@Sarah:
Thank you for bringing up your concerns and presenting them civilly. 🙂 We’ve had similar discussions on this issue in the past, and I know I speak for the whole KP staff when I say we want KP to be a place for the sharing of many different viewpoints and ideas.
While you make a lot of good points, you also make a lot of a…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin posted an update 8 years, 12 months ago
@damaris-tutor Hey, Damaris! Would you mind emailing me at the KP email (kingdompenmag@gmail.com)? I need to get your info so we can send you a t-shirt with your fantastic design on it! 🙂 Congrats!
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Reagan Ramm started the topic in the forum 9 years ago
Hey! Check out the latest episode of KPR where Haley talks about Poetry on the Very Serious Writing Show!
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Any Bloggers Out There? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
I second that, Rosey!
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
I agree with Kate. Good job all! 🙂
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@writefury Thank you, Rosey! lol! Yeah, that thought has crossed my mind. I’ll have to think about a good way to change it… Maybe I can add a footnote. “Check out John Flanagan’s “rangers”” 😀
@hope Thanks!! Gotcha, I’ll work on that. 🙂 And fabulous! I shall also follow you on the pinterest things. 🙂 (Yassssss! Hot chocolate for the win!)
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
lol! Yeah, sometimes I’ll go on a quote kick myself where I’m like “LOOK AT ALL THE SMART SAYINGS OF THE SMART PEOPLE! LOOK AT THEM! LOOOOOOOOK.” And then I think, “Wow, really could have picked a better senior quote.” XD And yesssss! Now we can officially share the nerdy things.
XD I can’t take credit for that idea. My lit teacher gave everyone…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@wordfitlyspoken We should start a club. xD “The Writers Who (Quietly) Don’t Drink Coffee” Also, no, I don’t mind at all! I totally just followed you on pinterest by the way. 😀
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy: lol! Yes, you are definitely in good company. Awesome, thanks for the suggestion. That was one of the lines I was actually poking with like “why are you not doing the things I want you to do, hmm?” I also don’t drink coffee (well, I kind of don’t– like, only when someone’s like “let’s go get coffee” and it’s a social obligation),…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flourney: lol! Yes, you are definitely in good company. Awesome, thanks for the suggestion. That was one of the lines I was actually poking with like “why are you not doing the things I want you to do, hmm?” I also don’t drink coffee (well, I kind of don’t– like, only when someone’s like “let’s go get coffee” and it’s a social obligation),…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Kate: lol! Yes, you are definitely in good company. Awesome, thanks for the suggestion. That was one of the lines I was actually poking with like “why are you not doing the things I want you to do, hmm?” I also don’t drink coffee (well, I kind of don’t– like, only when someone’s like “let’s go get coffee” and it’s a social obligation), but…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Kate: lol! Yes, you are definitely in good company. Awesome, thanks for the suggestion. That was one of the lines I was actually poking with like “why are you not doing the things I want you to do, hmm?” I also don’t drink coffee (well, I kind of don’t– like, only when someone’s like “let’s go get coffee” and it’s a social obligation), but…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin started the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Hi all!
Here’s another poem that I wrote a little while ago. I’d love to hear what y’all think! Specifically on line breaks (again– see a pattern) as well as if there are any lines that seem irrelevant or out of place. Thanks! Y’all rock.
Authors are those
who have traveled into so many souls
that when they reach out
they brush against…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic It's Just a Little Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Haha! I feel that. Sometimes, too, I want to write a poem, but I sit down and I’m like “Nope, not happening” even though there’s a rant eeking to get out of me. xD
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
Looks good, Daues! Can’t wait to read the finished product.
Something I do see off hand is there is a ” missing from the like He lives,” sing the leaves.
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
“as the stars begin their sweet lullaby”
(Maybe one more line?)
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