@clairec
Active 6 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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BlueJay replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
For me, South Australia really looks like Victoria. If we didn’t have a big sign saying “Welcome to South Australia” I wouldn’t know when we crossed the border.
And yes, it is very bushy.
I have been to the seaside. Quite a few times. 🙂 No, Victoria doesn’t have palm trees. If they were anywhere in Australia it would be Queensland. (@clairec Do…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@clairec I wrote 863 words. I’ve done my outlining and plotting so now it is just a matter of following it. 🙂 And I’m really happy with the way the story is going.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@ClaireC I agree that it would mean more to us Americans if you included the poem at the end. But then, if your intended audience is Australian, I suppose it doesn’t matter.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
Hey, @clairec , I liked your story. Basing your story on a poem is totally cool and creative. I especially liked the bit about the camera flash. 🙂
I will say though that I’m not certain the first paragraph is entirely necessary to your story. The moment he lost his father, while interesting in itself, frankly confused me as to what the story…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@clairec Great! I’ll check in 20, but I’m good to go 40. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@clairec Are you writing now? I am. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Yes, tag me then. I just got home from shopping so I was late today, but it would still be nice to write, so 3:30 should be fine.
I’ll still be editing this morning though. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Is anyone writing today? @kate-flournoy, @daeus, @jess, @clairec I’ve got some editing to do, if you can join me.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Okay, here we are @bluejay @ClaireC.
I confess I do not know what quokkas or goanna are. You have the coolest animals over there. What kind of seals do you have? I never thought of seals being around Australia, I don’t know why. Have either of you been to the Great Barrier Reef? I want to go there one day; it sounds amazing. @bluejay It’s too…[Read more] -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Okay, here we are @bluejay @ClaireC.
I confess I do not know what quokkas or goanna are. You have the coolest animals over there. What kind of seals do you have? I never thought of seals being around Australia, I don’t know why. Have either of you been to the Great Barrier Reef? I want to go there one day; it sounds amazing. @bluejay It’s too…[Read more] -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Have you read…? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@clairec and Sarah-h I didn’t get any reading done to day and I’m really cross. I read a paragraph out to my sister from a different book (couldn’t really avoid it) and that was all I did. Maybe next time will be better. You two sounded like you had a great day, though.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@ClaireC Sounds like you had an exciting day, though. Have fun with your youth group! 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Have you read…? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@bluejay I know, the ending with Jeff was terrible. Have you read his other two series, the Young Underground and the Promise of Zion? They are really good too, although Promise of Zion has a similar tragic ending. I found the Billabong series! I can’t wait to read it; thank you for suggesting it. 🙂 And…speaking of snakes…I have a really dumb…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Have you read…? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@bluejay I know, the ending with Jeff was terrible. Have you read his other two series, the Young Underground and the Promise of Zion? They are really good too, although Promise of Zion has a similar tragic ending. I found the Billabong series! I can’t wait to read it; thank you for suggesting it. 🙂 And…speaking of snakes…I have a really dumb…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@clairec No worries.
@daeus; @kate-flournoy; @clairec; @jess I’m starting 10 minutes early, but I’m going to 9 (USA) 11 (AUS)
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@ClaireC Yes, thanks for doing it with me. There have been a few days when I’ve been tempted to give up, but I am determined to stick with it.
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