@clairec
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@catwing Goodnight!
@seekjustice @jess-penrose I’m actually going to say goodbye now too. I don’t know if I’ll be back tonight, but probably not. So goodnight!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Ah no, I don’t think she did. It was fun anyway though!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@catwing I have trouble with showing not telling as well, so much of my editing involves fixing it! You are not alone in this struggle!
@Rochellaine i don’t think we were supposed to, but Jess did and I liked my last line so I did too!
I hope your confusion lessens some time soon 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Yes…Someday. 😛 Of course I thank you! But my fingers are feeling confused right now, since they don’t know where to go.
@jess-penrose Oh, are we supposed to give our last lines? I’ve never done that before. But mine was kind of weird… “With a quick shove, Chara managed to stand up, and then toppled…” 😉 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
My last line was:
above the din came Errol’s voice, but I could not distinguish his words from the rest of the chaos.
your last line is very interesting too 😉
Sorry, you’ll thank me one day though (or maybe not)
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Ohh…I just realized that I usually do fifteen minute word wars, so that makes me feel a little bit better. 🙂 But still. I usually get at least four hundred words in a ten minute war.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jess-penrose Okay. That was the absolute worst performance I have ever given in a word war! I got 203 words written, which I believe is half of my lowest score ever!
@seekjustice I am going to blame you. 😉 After all that horrible slashing and cutting you did to my story I hardly know where I am anymore! 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Me too! I got 375. How’d you guys go?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Ten minutes, sounds good!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jess-penrose @seekjustice Ending at :26 works for me.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Sure! Maybe then I’ll get some writing in. 🙂 How long?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, mate 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@catwing @jess-penrose @rochellaine
Would anyone like a word war???
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice @catwing Hi! I’m attempting to convince myself to decide to write… 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Catwing cool! Its been ages since I’ve seen you 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder @alia @Rochellaine @anyone
I’m writing? Would anyone like to join me?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
I personally don’t see a problem with it, but I will say that I see a destinction between non-Christian music and Popular music. I don’t listen to pop music because I don’t see it as uplifting, encouraging, God-honouring or entertaining, but I do listen to a lot of non-Christian music, such as musicals, because even when they aren’t…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Contemporary Western Novel in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira Oh, that’s interesting. I thought I had set it up so the emails would be sent from my website email address. I’ll have to check it out. Thanks! 😉
Okay, so I don’t want to use my real name for most internet stuff, just like most of the people here. That’s mostly for privacy, because literally anyone can see what we post her…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira I like what @sam-kowal said about how a person can do his work for God in any walk in life. That said, of course I also believe there is such a thing as bad music, and bad lyrics, which a Christian shouldn’t sing. I know some people believe you should only sing hymns, some believe you should only sing Psalms, some believe you can s…[Read more]
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