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@aislinn-mollisong  I was just on your Ember doc and…

…during the reign of King West and Queen Alia.”

Like that? 😉

@skredder  @rochellaine  @clairec  @aislinn-mollisong

The Beast is back!! Hi, guys! I’m writing

@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)

Possibly, these three revisions could help.

Feastings end – feasting ends.

Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.

The dwarfs are…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Hmm…. *smirks*  I like that! It’s unique!

… Wait, so how do you feel about me? Please don’t make me disappear! *prepares to hide under table*

@rochellaine  Absolutely! *whips out character notes* What’s your suggestion?

@rochellaine  Okay I’m back, but only for about twenty more minutes XD

The KPA is actually going to be a whole series of holiday-themed stories. So if you aren’t in this one, you will undoubtedly be in another one. And don’t worry — I won’t make you a creature 😉

@rochellaine  Ahh, I gotta go! Sorry I couldn’t stay longer! I shall return later!

@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.

As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.

Also, I…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Exactly! And it’s working out!

Cool! BTW I read what you had on the doc, and I really liked it!

@rochellaine  Hi!

Yep, KPA again. I want to get it done by March, so I’ve been working at it a lot

At least I have an idea, a vague one albeit, of what’s going to happen!

What are you working on?

@dragon-snapper  @catwing  @aislinn-mollisong  @rochellaine  @skredder  @audrey-caylin  @waterlily  @anyone

Let’s see if I can get more writing done… Care to join me?

Congratulations, @epicaddie2, you have created a ten-page trend!

@aratrea  @jenali  @sleepwalkingmk  @gh24682468999  @notawriter  @daughteroftheking  Thank you all! XD

N.C., very obsessive and observant binge-watching

@sam-kowal  I have made a topic for that before, actually XD

@seekjustice  “Brains exposed”  Ooooooohh….! 83

@rochellaine  Hi! Glad you could join us!

I gotta split now. Got distracted reading comics XD

But I wrote something! See you guys later

@clairec  A bull’s eye?! Cooooool 8-D

Now I really want to dissect an eye…

Have you ever dissected an owl pellet? I did it in middle school. It was cool! Most of the pellets were mice, but one of my friends had a bird!

@seekjustice  Whoa, that’s cool!

What languages do they speak in Australia other then English? Spanish is by far the most common, after English, where I live in America

@seekjustice  It drives me crazy that I can’t remember what a warm front means. A cold front means thunderstorms, and a warm front… I think it’s just like long, drawn out rain… But I don’t remember what they look like! Or the clouds! Uy, it’s been ages since I’ve studied physical science…

What languages are you learning, and what languages…[Read more]

@skredder  I’m like that! I’m visual and social. It doesn’t do any good unless someone is actually talking to me about it, and showing me how it works. That’s why I like video lessons more than reading lessons

@clairec  What’s the coolest thing you’ve ever dissected? *smirks* I’ve done a pig, a kidney, a frog… What else… I almost did a s…[Read more]