@christi-eaton
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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DelightInLife replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Thank you! Yes, that’s what I’m thinking too. Yes, I agree. Liam is supposed to be Josiah’s Helper on his Hero’s Journey, but he’s not really that fleshed out, so it would probably be better to cut him. 🙂 Thank you SO much for your help!!
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@sleepwalkingMK Sorry it took so long, but here is Joshua.

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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Yo @emily-d! I’m currently writing an article on this very topic that will hopefully be published by KingdomPen. The topic of the month of June is Science Fiction so that’s when my article will (fingers crossed) be published.
Right now, all I can say is quality over quantity. Research the genre, analyze books, break down movies, talk to people .…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Personally . . . don’t care because I don’t notice. If the book is riveting enough, then I don’t notice. I do notice if the book is a bore. So do what you want. I wouldn’t if I’m pressed for time, bu that’s just me.
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Snapper replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@emily-d 😀 I’m asking myself the same question.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@aysia-serene Yeah, I’ll re-compile the list. 😛
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@alia @ethryndal @graciegirl @emma-flournoy
My brother got 8 stitches in his hand, but he’s fine–no nerves or tendons or anything were nicked, so all we’re worried about now is that the wound will heal. Continued prayers would be appreciated, but thanks for your support!
Sorry I’m late replying to y’all…my mom pulled a “it’s almost Mother’s…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
Er…none of mine. That I’ve previously requested, that is.
And while we’re on that subject…I have this character named Ava Wayne. She’s the sister of Matthias, a character who @kate-flournoy drew for me a few pages ago.
I’ve been picturing her with red hair and hazel eyes. She has sharper facial features than her brother, and she’s always…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy You on?
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DelightInLife replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
WOW! Thank you so much! I will definitely be thinking about this! Part of it may be hard for me because it is a short story, so every word is important and I feel like I don’t have a lot of space. But portraying emotions is really important (particularly for this short story)
Thank you again!! 🙂
See you around!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
What?! @Dragon-Snapper
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m not gonna risk editing my post. It might disappear. 😛 So, @Dragon-Snapper—see above.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@DragonSnapper Chapter titles all the way! But only if they’re good ones. Which the standard for would vary with different people. 😛 No blatant spoilers, and only titles that make sense. I love good chapter titles, but if they’re dull and irrelevant then I’d rather not see them at all. When you do have chapter titles, aside from it providing…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Alia, great. 😀
@ClaireC Sure thing!
Oh wait, it happened today…I haven’t been on KP the last several days. 😛 Oh well. Hope you did great!@That_Writer_Girl_99 Oooh, not good at all. I’ll be praying.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal Aaaahhh! Whoa.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal *raises hand* I’ve read Treasure Island! Kidnapped is better though. 😉 All for Alan.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal child… seriously. Have some confidence in your own abilities. 😛 You explained that very well and I totally agree. Great points. I think you taught me something there. 😉 Or at least put something I’d only felt into words.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Haha, I was stalking K.M Weiland’s website the other day and actually copied this into my photos.
This makes so much more sense. I’ve never tried writing something so structured before, so I’m bound to make mistakes…ugh.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Key event? What’s that? @winter-rose
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