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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
@charityanne Cool!! I like that!
@theloonyone Ok, I know Charity is supposed to be the one answering the questions, but I saw the Olympic sport question and I knew what to answer…..
Lizard catching.
I don’t know, that’s just my favorite thing to do when I’m outside. I catch them, I identify whether they’re male or female (it’s possible…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Hi! I’m @princesachronicle22 lovely to make your aquaintence! Welcome to Kp! There are a few people on here who like to write poems as well
I am also a dancer! I’m starting competitions this year, and I’m excited 🙂
I mostly write fantasy sci-fi, (beacuse they can be the same I think) and romance, because I’m a big sap XD
Can’t…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Sorry if I didn’t ask very good questions 😂 my main list I use involves a lot of questions about fantasy type writing so i tried my best XD
I suppose snakes can be dangerous lol, I just think they’re so cute! Oh, I did read that poem! I liked it!
Welcome and we hope you have fun here!
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Light replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Hello! It’s nice to officially meet you!!!! (I guess we’ve already met a little bit, but who cares XD) I’m Lightoverdarkness6, a young teen writer who loves drawing, playing piano, exploring nature (especially woods and creeks), singing, and, of course, writing!!
Poetry is so cool! I haven’t written much, but I love reading it. I…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Hello! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m theloonyone
Hmm… Poetry. I’ve written a little bit of poetry, but most of it I will never ever share. 😐 I’d love to see some of yours if you’d like to share, though!
Anyway, newbie questions!
1. What kind of writing do you do? Do you have a favorite genre?
2. Stranded on an island. If you…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
That was so sweet and lovely! Thanks for sharing!
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Felicity replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Hi! I’m Felicity, a wannabe published author, homesteader and follower of Jesus. I am currently writing novels, but I have written poetry in the past and enjoyed it very much. My favorite poetry is what my Grandfather writes. He writes poems about everything…but always finds a way to make it uplifting and encouraging.
Welcome to KP!!!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
@charityanne Hello there! You have a nice name, it’s interesting! (I have an interesting name too, so…..)
You don’t have to answer if this makes you uncomfortable, but is that your real name or a pen name?
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Esther replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here and I write… A bunch of randomness really. Realistic medieval fantasy is what genre I place my WIPs, but nonfiction and poetry are never too far off.
Although poetry is usually much closer.
I’m thrilled to meet another poetry lover! Nature is a…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
poems
oh poems
those wonderful words
we wind them
and bind them
sounds slipping
we heard
smooth syllables sliding
together colliding
twisting and tying
spilling and flying
around up and down
them suddenly
a halt
it comes to a stop
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Elanor replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Hello! I’m known as Elanor round here! I’m a Jesus loving Canadian homeschool graduate (18) who listens to wayy to much music, keeps herself ridiculously busy with her full time job, home life, and volunteering with several church ministries every week, and spends what little time she has left reading or on Goodreads. Thus I’ve been…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings posted a new activity comment 2 years ago
@charityanne
Oh, well happy graduation then! I wish I could hold a asl conversation with you… kinda hard online XD ok wait let me try(1)dog+(2)cat+(3)horse+you+like+which (whq)
Did that make sense? 😂
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
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Esther replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Welcome, welcome!!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amatuer writer!!
It’s so cool that you write poetry!! I write poetry from time to time, but my main focus is books! My WIP is a YA dystopian trilogy; then I have ideas for a his-fic, biblical fiction, and con…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
Very nice!! 😍
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Hi!! Welcome to KP!! You have a lovely name and dancing??!!! 😍😍😍 Do you have any poems about birds?
I’m a homeschool graduate. Right now I’m working full time as a barista but I am still trying to find time to write. I write stories mostly but every once in a very great while I will get inspired and write a poem. I find I have to…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
I love that! It was super sweet and it flowed really well. I think Min is right with the stanza thing, but it was still fun to read. Also, you could maybe put a period after “rude to me” and make “He was a gentleman” it’s own sentence to make the ending more powerful.
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Loopy replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Hello, I’m Loopy. I like writing a lot of genres, but mostly fantasy. I love poetry, but I’ve only done a little bit myself, and they were made to be songs or prophecies in my stories.
I like your name. Is it at all based off of Anne of Green Gabels?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
I liked that! I think some stanzas to separate it might help, I wasn’t quite sure how the flow was supposed to go.
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nope.. LOL
@charityanne
Lol thats ok! The asl grammer is super confusing, I still don’t totally get it. I basically asked which you liked. The (whq) means I raised my eyebrows to make a questioning face, to signify it was not a statement.
Ahh I see. 😊