Charityanne

@freedomwriter76

That was soo good! I didn’t cry lol, but I could feel my eyes getting hot 😂

Does it seem boring?

Nope! Almost, but I was mostly engaged.

How is the pace?

It’s good for the scene, it feels a little slow but it’s not a action scene so that’s to be expected.

Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?

Aw yess… I a…[Read more]

@rae

Lol thanks! Wasn’t even trying to be funny.

And Junior seems like a fun character. You should add him :]

@whalekeeper

Dante 

After a silent moment, Dante dropped down and sat cross legged next to Sebastian.

“You aren’t too bad yourself, I think.”

He resisted the urge to pull out his lighter and play with it. Instead, he messed with his hair.

“I used to have a hat. One of those old flat caps. I loved it, but it, uh, got a little burnt.”

@whalekeeper

Dante

Dante hesitated. His pupil narrowed like a cat’s. (I keep forgetting that his eye does that) But there wasn’t much point in lying now.

“I… just needed food. Didn’t expect Hugo to pay.”

He fidgeted with his sleeve which he had rolled up to hide the large tear.

“And some other things,” he muttered.

(Dante doesn’t dislike…[Read more]

@esther-c

of course! 🙂

@mineralizedwritings Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I just wanna give Lois a hug…

I think Lois would be good at giving hugs

Dante

One corner of Dante’s mouth twitched upwards into a half smile. As much as he wanted to, he did not get this kid. The others were easy. Cal wanted to learn, and he was loyal to Princess Kate and whatever country it was that they came from. Hugo was fri…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whaaat? I would never.  *Hides plot idea notes*

@esther-c

Huh, I’ve never really thought of it that way before, but I think that’s the aspect of their relationship that I play off of in the second book to create more conflict. Man, I am going to be pondering over this all day. XD

XD glad I could make you think! It might be a good source of conflict for book 2, but I think it would be great if…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

My world sometimes makes the mental, physical.”

Oh my gosh that is such a cool concept. Stop making me want to read books that don’t even exist yet

@freedomwriter76

I’m still not getting notified when you tag me 😭

anyways they looks super cute together!

@loopylin

Wow those hands look amazing!!

@savannah_grace2009

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Nope! Super intriguing!

2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?

Very relatable!

3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make so…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks for giving specific question, it really helps!

Answering as if I’ve never heard your writing before XD

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

I was confused as to why the story had so much action before a exposition. It felt like information overload on many things, and I couldn’t tell what was important. Should, I think…[Read more]

@acancello

Woah!! I’m so proud of you!! Good luck on your edits! 💖💖🎉🎉

@acancello

Wait, what’s this about you writing your epilogue?! Did you finish something big?

@esther-c

Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write any other…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @loopylin @whalekeeper

Ok this is kinda long, if it looks familiar it’s a complete redo of a scene I posted awhile ago 🙂

I’m at exactly 24k now… progress is slow but going alright.

For those of you who don’t know, Aleshia is Lesli’s new boss but also the mother of her best friend, Tauren, so she grew up…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’ll show you if I ever finish it lol!

Wow, 35 pages? You go girl!!

Also, love the scene. Erich is really interesting…

Btw I’m not getting notifs for anything you tag me in 🙄 if there’s something you want me to see and you think I missed it feel free to let me know in a update!

@smiley

Oh thank you soooo much 😭😭 I’m so glad it’s not the ross I like

@keilah-h Lol that’s awesome! It’s always so satisfying when you draw decent hands