Charityanne

@I’mtooselfconsioustoactullytagpeople

Here’s some twin sketches

@ellette-giselle

You did a really good job conveying the characters’ emotions. I love how they’re all feeling the same sadness, but are all expressing it differently.

Idk who you wanted to be the main focus, but my eyes are immediately drawn to the girl standing in the back and then secondly to the dead guy.

@whalekeeper  Yes, you do

@elishavet-pidyon

I’ve been kinda struggling with the same thing with my character. I can’t decide if I want the realistic scars or the more stylized black burn marks I had before.

My best advice is to look at references (if they don’t bother you), and to draw him a bunch and try new things each time you draw him…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m not going to beat myself up!

👍

This is basically the toughest tough love statement, and I can only imagine it coming from Loops XD

lol I guess you bring out the direct side of me? My confident side? Idk what to call it.

@elishavet-pidyon

Hey, I have a similar character! Aint fire related trauma fun?

I guess it kinda depends on your art style. Realistically, burn scars are typically pinkish white, surrounded by a more reddish version of the person’s natural skin color.

Ummm i have more to say but my work break is over now so I will come back later :]

@euodia-vision

Thanks!

@freed_and_redeemed

Thanks  for the help lol XD

@whalekeeper

XD thank you!

@koshka

XD that’s hilarious. Y’know he could have black hair, I just saw the movie images before reading the book, so he’s always had red brown for me.

Same on the cloak, same.

Thanks @keilah-h !

@ellette-giselle

Thanks! I always think of him a being solemn, lol.

I’m not expecting you to do both I just couldn’t decide sorry

@whalekeeper

Wait, actually, do you just want to pick one of these two?

Maggie (Mags) McKay

She is in her early twenties, has short, sandy blonde hair, and is very tall and lanky. Because of her height, and just her general inability to pay attention, she is very clumsy snd tends to trip over herself a lot. She is very extroverted and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Sorry I can’t decide. You can skip me if you want.

@linus-smallprint

Don’t put the commas and the tags’ll work.

Also, I’m so sorry I’m behind. Been so worn out from work, I barely have any energy to read anything, even stuff I really enjoy. I really love your book so far so please keep tagging me! I just might be really behind and slow to respond, sorry.

@mineralizedwritings

I love it. Idk why, but the part when she came out of the tent was so cool and intimidating. I wanna read more. :]

@whalekeeper

That hits harder than I want it to. 😕

heh same

XD Yeah, it’s 100% my fault for not making any effort.

Literally no one else thinks that. Stop it. ❤️

@savannah_grace2009

That’s a fun idea! I’ll have to listen to that playlist later. Is it alright if I follow you on Spotify?

@whalekeeper

Girl, seriously. What could possibly have to take blame for 🤣 You are at fault for nothing!! You don’t have to share your writing, me or somebody else asks or doesn’t. <3

Yw

Yeah… same. Story of my life rn. Y’know that song by one republic “I lived”? every time I miss a opportunity to have a experience, I remember the lyrics.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Wow I don’t think anyone’s asked me that XD I appreciate it. I don’t share a lot of my stuff as you know, but sure, I’ll keep you in mind! ❤️

XD they probably haven’t asked because you’re a little more private with your writing. I figured I’d just let you know I’m interested <3

@whaley @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @loopylin @anyone…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m so honored you consider me experienced lol

Oh, and the two brothers inheritance conflict came from history. Goodness, was it roman history? I was watching some video with my dad about it lol.

@theducktator

I’ll try to be of help!

I write post-dystopia. Like after such government fails and the world has been in dilapidated disorder for a long time. It’s kinda similar lol

It sounds like you’re concerned it isn’t believable. What I would say is use history as your guide. There are evil governments, like Hitler’s dictatorship, but there…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok ok XD sure thing

Actually can you tag the lotr readers here? I don’t know who they are lol

I recently finished Lotr and did this Chibi of Farimir.