Charityanne

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c

No worries!! I totally understand. 🙂 I hope y’all have a good week!

@freedomwriter76

Ahh I LOVE it!!! Girl, it’s so good!!

Everyone’s already critiqued, and I don’t have anything to critique, so I’m just here to say Great job! 😀 I can’t wait to read more of it. Oh sweet, precious Riker!!!

And Erich…you better be kind to that sweetheart!!

Just one question: Who is Esther? I thought that she was Eva for a…[Read more]

@acancello

#1- What would your character do if they found a $100 bill on the ground?

Jonathan: “I would convert it into ducats and buy a ship.”

Lana: “I would save it.”

Jonathan: “For what?”

Lana: “Just to have it.”

#2-What would your character’s dream home look like and where would it be?

Jonathan: “A tent in the woods.”

Lana: “…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oooo, good question.

If you were stranded on an island, what one person would you want to be with?

Lana: “Probably my Uncle Ethando, because he’s been so many places and knows so much about…”

Jonathan: “….life?”

Lana: “Yeah!”

Jonathan: “I wouldn’t take anyone with me.”

Lana: “You can’t. That’s not answering the…[Read more]

@esther-c

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Wow. That was super fun/scary to read! Is there a second book? I mean, there’s got to be more! 🙂 I really like how you described the aunt and uncle. I could totally picture the cottage.

@whalekeeper

Lol me seeing another character named sebastion is so weird XD

My sister has one, and he’s the most disgusting villian. He’s got all these chunky rings (blech) and really thinks he’s something else. And is very diceptive.

Anyways, we call him seb or sebby lol

@keilah-h @whalekeeper

Dante

“Potions?” Dante asked, slipping a couple vials out of Sebastian’s pocket while his back was turned. He leaned against the counter next to Bullet and examined them. One was a thick, bubbling orange liquid with the label “fire breath”. Dante immediately pocketed this one and then read the other. It was labeled “…[Read more]

I’m leaving for a movie night, btw, so I won’t be active

Okee

@whalekeeper

I love Sebastian so much. Have you written any of the story he’s in?

@freedomwriter76

That’s what I thought XD I didn’t want to get it wrong, or spend way to long searching the writing for when you mentioned it lol

@freedomwriter76

Oh ok that makes since. I didn’t know if it was a second book or like a parallel plot-line book.

Yw!

Oh yeah, I’ve adopted them now. 🥰🤣

Or at least Reuben.

@whalekeeper @keilah-h

Dante 

As Dante and Sebastian walked towards the kitchen, they were distracted by two girls digging through a closet. Small vials of various liquids were scattered on the floor around them.

“Ha!” One girl held up a bottle filled with a shimmery clear substance. “This’ll be fun, listening to what Rivet has to say while un…[Read more]

@keilah-h @whalekeeper

Yesss partners in crime >:)

@freedomwriter76

Ok so, LOVE IT!!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

He had to be on patrol with Riker, the officer that was the same rank as Erich yet was too soft to even handle interrogations?

We all know sweet Riker, and to me this felt like the kind of introduction he might get to people who already are vaguely familiar with him. idk if you…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh that’s fine! Lol, I’m sorry! I forgot to put a name XD. Ooh, I like that name. My nickname is Nat, you could call me that or Alina :).

I’m washing the dishes rn, so I don’t think I’ll be able to do it today :(. By the time I’m finished it will probably be over.

Next Friday :).

@mineralizedwritings esther, @whalekeeper

y’all have fun! 🙂

@sarafini @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

“Oh!” I turn backwards, caught between the awkwardness of Derek Len’s blocking our path, esther, and the new girl.

“Hey, I’m Elizabeth. What’s your name?”

“Oh! I’m Lesli…” I smile nervously, one eye still trained on Derek.

(Also Lesli is 19 if any of you guys didn’t know) (I know this is…[Read more]

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

I follow behind Esther as she takes us down some stairs, eager for more exploration. She stops, astonished by a man standing in front of us. I make a face. He looks gross for some reason I cannot explain.

“Derek Len?” Esther says, awestruck.

I raise an eyebrow at her. They know eachother?

“Hate to br…[Read more]

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

Lesli

“Explore this library, of course!”

I rub my hands together excitedly, ready to take off into a grand adventure. I would rather be doing this with–

–oh nevermind. I’ve got plenty of new people to meet here.

Cut off by a piercing scream, I look to my left.

“What was that?”

Are they ok?…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 Sorry I’ve forgotten who else!

Ey! Friday squad, we ready for this?!