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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
😀 I sleep very nicely actually. Thanks to the soft bed that my characters don’t have. 😀
Yes, precious. *gollum gollum* It’s very nice, very nice. *gollum*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@winter-rose Ooh. Mechanical unicorns. That does sound cool!
Then I must not be a writer.
I keep the soft beds and chocolate for myself. Selfish, I know.
The story is called Regulation so far. I’ll see if it changes, but that’s that as of now. It’s a futuristic utopia.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@winter-rose 😀 Hiya Frodo!
Er… A weird unicorn? For art?
I’m working on writing my new novel. Something bad is going to happen soon! Yay! Uh, I mean…uh. Oh no. That’s terrible. Poor MCs… *sorrynotsorry*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess-penrose @dekreel @winter-rose @perfectfifths @daughteroftheking @that_writer_girl_99 Anyone up for word war? 😀 Or just being here? 😀
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Lady Iliara replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper That’s from the Avengers! Nick Fury to Loki. (Just watched that again the other night) 😁😁
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Lady Iliara replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel Ok, I’m here! The Snowmoors is mostly pretty flat, with lots of ice, although there are a lot of rock outcroppings. You’ll find snow cobras, snow scorpions, and snow crocodiles there. And I have no clue what’s west of the Snowmoors—that’s up to you, I guess. 😉 (I’ve never been to the mountains.)
And I think @0-0enyali0-0 explained i…[Read more]
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Lady Iliara replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus Just downloaded it! Can’t wait to read it when I have time! *hands you a raspberry scone topped with whipped cream*
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Joy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon :-O :-O Y-you don’t like sci-fi?? How?!
Guess: “75 percent chance of science!”
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Ethryndal replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Okay, peeps, how’s this?
It is a well-accepted fact in the province of Reed that Fairy Godmothers do exist. You might even have one, if you meet all the requirements to be a Distressed Personage, or your father pays enough money. And if you’re lucky — really, truly lucky — you might be one of those rare few who are chosen at random to recei…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus Congrats!! So excited for you! 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@ethryndal I think pretty much everyone else has said it, but I’ll confirm. It’s too long and it gives too much of the story away. I think you should condense the first paragraph, but don’t cut all of it out, and then completely get rid of the second paragraph, and then I believe it would be short enough to, say, fit on the back cover of a…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!
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Ethryndal replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Hmm… general consensus being it’s too long… *tugs nose* How do I go about this…
Okay, so I sheered the top bit off. Better? Worse? Still too long?
Biddle Frankenmore wasn’t exactly what you would call Heroine Material. She wasn’t beautiful. She couldn’t sing. She wasn’t in any particular sort of distress, besides the occasional tumble…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@ethryndal *wiggles eyebrows* I wanna read it…although, I feel like I’ve just read the whole book. 😉 It is a tad too long, but that’s nothing a little editing can’t fix. 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus *highfive* And just for good measure……
🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨
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Ethryndal started the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Heeeey…
So, I kinda wrote a synopsis for my outlined novel. (Yes, I haven’t even started writing the dumb thing yet, but I need a synopsis for… REASONS. *solemn nod* Plus, they’re handy things to have lying around. I’ll change what I have to when the book is finished. So.)
Having never written a synopsis (or anything even remotely resembling a sy…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus Woot!!! Congratulations!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Yay! Can’t wait to read it, @daeus!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose @perfectfifths Signing off. My brother has turned my story into an epic ballad. Amusing. XD
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