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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, @rochellaine, doesn’t the song Proud of Your Boy from Aladdin kinda reflect both Justice and Zac during the bar fight? not completely, but somewhat?
(it probably doesn’t but I’m listening to that broadway right now and that song just came on and so that thought lept into my brain)
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, @rochellaine, I have to say, I liked Zac a lot better than Justice from the beginning. I mean, I knew he was going to turn out better, but even before he did I could see that he was acting the way he was as protection against getting hurt. Which made him opening up to Chessy so easily and quickly a bit confusing.
Justice was…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I don’t mind being held accountable to you who are on the other side of the world, because I’m already accountable to my sister for Quillon and she’s in the same bedroom. If Quillon dies, I die too. 😀
I fluctuate between adoring Justice and absolutely hating him. He could possibly die if I’m in a bad mood.
And no, Chessy…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Well, you see, she didn’t love Jonas as much as she loved Quillon. I love Jonas better than Quillon, and Zac better than Justice, but she’s chosen Quillon as her favorite, and none of the other men mean nearly as much to her as Quillon does.
I am in complete agreement with you, but if the author loves Quillon, the author must be allowed t…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice I have a confession. I didn’t actually cry at Zac’s death.
Partly it was because, like @alia said, I kept getting called away and when I finally got to the end I wasn’t immersed in the story as I should have been. The other reason was probably because I already knew he would die, and he died in the exact same way and sequence as Sy…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine, I don’t know. If she is willing to kill someone as wonderful as Jonas I think she is capable of anything…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Hey, I’m here for a while. I’ll drop out in a bit for family worship, but I’m here now and I’ll be back after that. 😉 (Our guests left this morning…well, some of them… 😛 )
@alia Don’t worry, I doubt she’ll ever kill Quillon, Chessy, or Justice. Well, I’m not completely sure about Justice. 😛 She won’t kill Chessy bec…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, uh huh, I’m holding you to that
Thats what I thought. I actually can’t remember if you even showed us Jonas’ death scene of if we just found out when Chessy (or Justice) did.
Oh, and I would have cried, but every time I started getting emotionally involved I kept getting called away until the tears were gone.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I would never, never, never kill Quillon. You have my word. He is the only safe character.
I did that on purpose (making Jonas’ death more impersonal). Death in war is not often a particularly personal thing, especially in trench warfare, and Chessy had also got to the point where she was overwhelmed and had to stop herself from caring so…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, Hey, I’m here for the moment. But I might be popping in and out. I’m about to go clean a bathroom.
oh, and really? Zac? let me guess, Quillon dies in book 3?
(Zac’s death was better than Jonas’ in my opinion with how it was written. it felt more personal)
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, I was wondering if you would do a favour for me? You’ve given me some invaluable feedback on Stars Fill Infinity but would you mind filling out the questions at the end of the second book? Just so I can get some more indepth thoughts on that one as well? Thanks!
Anyone around?
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Alia posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
So I’m not quite sure where to share this, but I guess this will work.Â
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15qXXuDlcATOMuOeglLrH6jK0RDXPbSIMEFHWir_IMJg/edit?usp=sharing
This is a doc I made with a character checklist. Feel free to copy it, add on, tweak, whatever.
@jenwriter17, @seekjustice, @ariel-ashira, @rochellaine, @valtmy, and whoever…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Wow! Its awesome! Its really pretty and I love your About page. You also look different to how I imagined you (but please don’t ask me how I imagined you because then I’d have to sheepishly admit that I was still imagining the steampunk horse 😛 )
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17, okay, hopefully this weekend
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, @jenwriter17, @valtmy, @rochellaine anyone on?
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Alia replied to the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17, it looks great. can’t wait to see what you post
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
and signing out
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, @jenwriter17, @valtmy, anyone on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Okay, goodnight! Talk do you soon. 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Well, that would have been clever if she could have got it to work. 🙂
Anyway I’m going to go to bed now because *gasp* its 10:15 I’ll talk tomorrow…or the day after or whatever 😛
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@alia This is cool! Are we allowed to print it off and use it for our own characters?
@jenwriter17, yep go ahead. I put it here so y’all could have access to it and use it however you want
@alia thanks! 🙂
@jenwriter17, yep, no problem