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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Wow! Thanks, that helps a lot XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Sorry guys, I haven’t been on a ton. I’ve been really, really busy!
Can someone give me a quick recap?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I know she’s in a corner, but what exactly do I need to give her POV on?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas @acancello @esther-c @rae @freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h
WHAT IS GOING ON?? I am confuzzled
can someone give me a recap, lol
Where is Ottoline? What do I need to write her doing?
Sorry, I’ve been really busy with volleyball tournaments and haven’t had time to be on.
Can someone help me XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
The only drawback is…it leaves painful headaches for the “victim”…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I mean, she could’ve had a crush before her family moved… but I didn’t think that far back lol. It doesn’t really matter for the sake of the story though. I’ll try to update this again soon.
Well, it’s the first in the story XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
SOMEONE HELP US THESE GUYS ARE QUITE POSSIBLY GOING TO MURDER EACH OTHER!” The Sword screamed.
Zahlin froze.
You’re welcome. Sword said proudly.
That’s hilarious
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
From what I have seen, I’m thinking Ellis might not like him, but we’ll have to wait till he actually shows up to interact with them.
Ellis doesn’t like anyone, lol XD
(except guys that have cool swords. Even then, there’s a chance he’ll hate you)
(just kidding.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)
Ottoline
“Are you chilled?” He asked.
“I-I-” she began. She desperately wanted to run, but her feet might as well have been useless bricks.
“She’s alright,” a familiar voice spoke from next to her. Hugo. “She’s just a little on edge.” Ottoline managed to smile at him g…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ottoline
Oh no.
The man approached, sword at his side. She shrank back, looking frantically for Hugo. Her heart beat faster with panic as she saw Hugo talking to Kari and Hedieh and Amir across the room.
She froze.
“Hello, my name is Lord Nahim,” he said.
Oh no. Ellis probably sent him to kill me because he’s too much of a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Probably? Just don’t expect her to be totally comfortable XD
Any men with weapons scare her, unless she trusts them completely (obviously). But she’ll probably realize soon that no one’s going to hurt her.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Though, she’d probably also want to help since she hates the queen.
From Ellis’s perspective, that’s what it was, basically. He could tell that she was scared of him at first, but he has no idea why. If he knew what she had been thinking, he might be a bit more sympathetic, or he might just be annoyed that she assumed bad things about him…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
She would probably be really scared of him still, until he proves himself to be trustworthy. With being kidnapped and all, she doesn’t feel safe.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I mean, technically Ottoline didn’t scorn/belittle him, she was just having a panic attack because she’s been hurt before. She wasn’t mad, she was just afraid of him. (I know it’s probably just how Ellis thinks, I just think it’s funny that he feels that way.) Also, Ottoline kind of does care, she already tried to fight the queen….so….
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Well, I got to go get ready for school. Bye guys!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Montana is the coldest state except Alaska, right? We have had pretty warm winters the last few years (sadly) so I find it odd that there’s such a difference between Wisconsin and Montana. Montana isn’t too much farther North.
I don’t know if it’s the coldest or not, but probably? Cut Bank, a town in Montana has the record for coldest spo…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I get that. When it goes from 40 to 80 to 60 it’s kind of annoying, it did that here too. I love fall, so I wish we could get 40-50 degree temps for a while and enjoy fall before snow. Because when the snow melts, all the leaves will be gone and it will be a muddy mess.
Hopefully the snow doesn’t last long! I’m ready for it to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Well….usually Montana winters are really harsh. The winds are terrible, blowing about 30 miles per hour making about 4 foot drifts in our yard. And when you have to go 25 on the highway, it’s just kind of ridiculous.
I mean, the snows pretty and I like snow, just right now it’s a lot and really, really cold. Though I suppose I should be…[Read more]
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