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@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@keilah-h

Hmm, I will remember to choose a fork for a weapon next time someone throws me into a tournament.

@koshka

All people are weird in their own way, some more dramatically than others. It’s the “normal” ones that usually scare me.

Those are the kinds of people who are average and forgettable enough to be spies, you see.

@loopylin

Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨

<3

@ellette-giselle

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

Oh she’s…[Read more]

Except @loopylin

She’s an absolute weirdo, don’t know what to make of her

@koshka @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I was plopped into this world with many weird friends – a pyrotechnician and a chronic tea drinker among them – so the people on here are pretty normal in my eyes.

@keilah-h I mean, that’s what I had assumed. So your thoughts aren’t too crazy. Unless I’m crazy, of course.

@theducktator

But why though.

Becuuuuuzzzzz Eric isn’t a worse guy than Edmund or Eustace were. He’s cowardly, but he cares about his sister. So there. Humph.

@linus-smallprint

*Comes in guns blazing* I shall defend Eric if needs must.

@the_lost-journal

How do you say Ahava? Uh-hah-vah? I like it (well, I guess I shouldn’t say that when I don’t know how it’s actually pronounced, but it looks like it would sound pretty 😅). If you like it and can’t think of any particular reasons not to keep it, I’d say go with it.

As for Thomas… hmm… is there a certain style/ethnicity of…[Read more]

@loopylin

@anyone what classes do you want to do?

Barnes is overseeing some literature-related class, so there’s that

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.

@ellette-giselle

Okaaaaay, after I give them some decent shading. But only then. *Glares at your blackmail and poofs away*

@ellette-giselle

It’s very funny…. but as I work through my WWII set, I’ve just had an amazing idea for a fantasy. I wonder it WWII triggers fantasy ideas…….. lolololol.

*Meanwhile I sit here with a WWII era inspired fantasy, watching you talk* 😁

@ellette-giselle

*Reconsiders*

NO. NO, I’LL NEVER GIVE IN! I’M TOO INSECURE , YOU CAN’T MAKE ME! *Struggles against my bonds*

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?