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Loopylin replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 36 minutes ago
*Subscribing*
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Loopylin replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 39 minutes ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey posted an update 10 hours, 2 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle How are you feeling? How did your doctor’s appointment go?
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 hours, 14 minutes ago
I’ve read this before…………. maybe in the snowball fight?
Yep. This is the same, it just has the ending now.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 hours, 15 minutes ago
first off, I want a copy of your pfp!!!
Okay
Also, do you like coffee? Because I have a funny black cat one for coffee (pinterest is my friend)
Second, I find bad eating habits common among Authors. I think it’s because we get so lost in our book worlds that we forget about the real world.
Yeah…I can relate to t…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 hours, 20 minutes ago
@raxforge (because this short story has changed a little since you last read it) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Fifth story!
(not sure if I like the title, but it’ll do)
A Scar Hidden by a Scarf
Cold. Freezing cold.Baron’s teeth chattered as he hugged himself, pulling his thin leather jacket closer around his body. His b…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 hours, 24 minutes ago
lol. No. I don’t do that until closer to 2:00 in the afternoon………………….
pretty much same for me usually, except the past few days. Mom and Dad have recently kept a stock of my favorite cereal so I now have incentive to eat breakfast, so recently I’ve skipped lunch.
And I just realized as I said that that I haven’t eaten anything…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 49 minutes ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
THIS TREND SLAAAAAAYYYYS ✨
but most of the time they can simply pull moisture from the air and rehydrate.
Mooooost of the time. Except when they’re in the desert. 😁 Or if they get freeze-dried and packaged. (That got dark…)
If a Pitt can’t sing, they can’t control the plants as they do not…
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 14 hours, 5 minutes ago
They don’t have blood, but if cut the wound will spill light that in turn heals it.
That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎
So there are “laws unbreakable” like the cost of reason and the concept of ransom blood which are deep in the fabric of the world.
How does the concept of ransom blood work? What are some of the other unbre…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 14 hours, 17 minutes ago
Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD
I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?
Ideas ideas
– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit
– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 14 hours, 44 minutes ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 1 hour ago
(I’m only gone foe a few days, and suddenly people are changing their usernames and profile pictures all at once. How am I supposed to know who’s who anymore?)
You look at tags. Those never change.
I think I’m partly to blame for this. I changed my name to a silly nickname of mine, then Andrew changed his, and then other peo…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 2 hours ago
Your senses were correct! This is a redemption story.
Small note on the next story, it was originally began for the short story prompt “a story of a scar” but never finished as such for it sparked the entire Baron Chronicles actually being written, and the story behind Baron’s scar has already been revealed so I had to…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 2 hours ago
Wow, name-changing is becoming a tread.
Tsk, tsk. No self-deprecation allowed on this topic.
Now you sound like Andrew lol
Does Chase have the element of Creatures? After all, he is the ultimate ✨Disney Princess✨!
I have that meme saved somewhere…
Yes, he’s actually the reason that element came to be. He’s also the reason I…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
Okay everyone, I’m gonna share some of the races in my world!
Aquinos:
Aquinos have blue skin, hair, and eyes. They have the power to pull moisture out of the air and manipulate it. If there is no moisture in the air, they are helpless. They also tend to be easily dehydrated if they’ve used their power too much, but most of the time they c…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
YOU CHANGED YOUR NAME TOOOO
YOU’RE NOT A POTATO ANYMORE
*brain explodes*
I LOVE IT
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
I LOVE IT
You can still share those, since I would classify fantastical powers/abilities as magic on this topic. Basically we’re here to talk about any fantastical abilities, technically magic in-story or not. XD
Okay perfect!
I’m still fleshing those out a little as to why and how their powers w…[Read more]
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HighScribe posted an update 1 day, 5 hours ago
EVERYONE IS CHANGING THEIR NAMES I DON’T EVEN KNOW WHO ANYONE IS ANYMORE.
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
Aaand I’ll reply to everyone else, but I have to go. *Poofs away*
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
That type of randomness must be preserved.
I agree. You can definitely keep that vibe and just make up the rules for yourself so you stay consistent. You wouldn’t have to tell anyone the rules of the system.
It seems like your magic comes from fantastical animals. I don’t know if that’s true, but I do think that would be a great source of…[Read more]
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@rae
I’m feeling better actually! It went well. She adjusted me, (she’s a chiropractor) and ran some tests on my knee, and it looks like I have a small crack on the knee cap and some bleeding under the skin, but it should heal okay on it’s own. I’m still using crutches but I’m trying to only use them to help me balance while a walk. I hate being…[Read more]
Hope you feel better soon! I’ll be praying for a quick recovery
Thank you!
Glad you’re doing better! I’ll continue to pray.
And don’t push yourself too far.
I’ll try.