Kingdom Pen | Cahndida Serkhaman | Friends Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/cahndida-serkhaman/activity/friends/ Activity feed for Cahndida Serkhaman's friends. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 2fd3a293a6d357c388561ebddd104b00 MarkMcGuire posted an update: I should get back on here. https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85869/ Mon, 17 Dec 2018 02:22:10 -0500 I should get back on here.

]]> 0 8531f4f16cb92736422858c1a804aa7e BlueJay started the topic Beta reading in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/beta-reading-2/ Tue, 11 Dec 2018 11:45:56 -0500 This probably isn’t the place for it, but hey, it’s where we all are, so I’m just going to stick it under general writing.

I have a novella that I’d loooooove beta read…. so hands up anyone??????

(Still can’t remember most people’s tags. @seekjustice is one I can remember @catwing another. Please tag other people for me.)

]]> 546b542f0daba706992077fe91fc6511 BlueJay replied to the topic Long Years Ago...... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/long-years-ago/page/2/#post-78305 Thu, 06 Dec 2018 09:14:04 -0500 Hey guys. Sorry I haven’t been around much. I’m trying to make more time for writing. Still tag me if you’re keen to write, and I’ll hopefully be around. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 1f8603dffc64b6abc57f297e72852589 BlueJay and Joy are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85696/ Tue, 20 Nov 2018 12:55:46 -0500 0 e6d644336a271e367ee24f7fdb59fc3d BlueJay replied to the topic Long Years Ago...... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/long-years-ago/page/2/#post-78199 Tue, 20 Nov 2018 10:29:39 -0500 @alia oooo both of them are good. I personally love Sir Quinlan the best. I relate to him the most. Rowan was good too, but it was sadder.

]]> 38352c5d29fbb9d2ae65797a0bf35069 BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-21/page/51/#post-78191 Tue, 20 Nov 2018 03:58:50 -0500 @rochellaine Puppet making. (Look up Susie Adiva on Instagram if you have it.) That’s my puppet and it also has a link to my puppet friends facebook page.

]]> a2c091ef11bb902b728b8daac7b7864f BlueJay replied to the topic Long Years Ago...... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/long-years-ago/#post-78190 Tue, 20 Nov 2018 03:56:33 -0500 @alia yeah the last one in WOTR was a bit weird. Yes, I have read the Knights of Arrethtrae as well. LOL!

@catwing Haha *spoiler alert* oops. Yes, you do need to read those books. They are awesome and you’ll love them.

]]> 1bdaa5407dbb8689b5593bd25ae42130 BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-21/page/50/#post-78183 Tue, 20 Nov 2018 03:17:53 -0500 @alia Yes, it’s me.

@rochellaine No I don’t believe we have met. *shakes your hand warmly* I used to be here two years ago, but then life got in the way. I don’t know how much I’ll be able to jump on KP, but I’m back. (I’m starting a home business, so it’s got my focus a bit atm).

]]> cab90e78e98786cd830127870bb642ea BlueJay replied to the topic Long Years Ago...... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/long-years-ago/#post-78182 Tue, 20 Nov 2018 03:14:37 -0500 @alia Course i remember you. You’re even friends with me on here. ๐Ÿ™‚ Oh dear. Yes, the fire does seem to have caused things to shut down around here. I wondered what had happened. Oh well, we shall have to do the best we can with charcoal desks and singled chairs.

]]> 84fceb6c4607e57029d585476725ea19 BlueJay replied to the topic Long Years Ago...... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/long-years-ago/#post-78180 Tue, 20 Nov 2018 03:00:35 -0500 @jenwriter Oh that’s hard. I think my favourite series is Wars of the Realm. But my favourite book is Kingdom’s Quest. I love Keanna. I made a movie once for his competitions and did a scene from her book. Here’s the link.

]]> 3ed6bb3e271829fe3514e1890cb71765 BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-21/page/50/#post-78173 Tue, 20 Nov 2018 02:48:25 -0500 @rochellaine I’m Aussie and I play that alphabet car game. It’s great to help pass the time. Q is hard. We tend to use the word “quote” which is on electrical cubicles beside the road for things like traffic lights etc. I’m not sure exactly what they are used for, but they are there. X is the really hard one for me. (For a harder level, we also…[Read more]

]]> f97984452e0dd5f2427ba19f0d378f42 BlueJay replied to the topic Long Years Ago...... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/long-years-ago/#post-78172 Tue, 20 Nov 2018 02:42:23 -0500 @catwing yes, I use to be on here a lot. I miss how bubbly this place used to be too. It’s always a shame when things change, but life does go on.

@jenwriter17 Yay! Questions. Let’s see. I love books about Biggles. He’s a pilot during WWI & WWII. Great adventures and lots of suspense. As for my fav author, I love books by Chuck Black. My hobbies…[Read more]

]]> dd6b005a666456010a788468e9544004 BlueJay replied to the topic Long Years Ago...... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/long-years-ago/#post-78160 Mon, 19 Nov 2018 09:24:42 -0500 @dekreel Wow, thanks for such a warm welcome back. ๐Ÿ™‚ Well, I have not been stolen away to this story embers website.

This is indeed the bestiestestest place ever!!!!!

@emma-flournoy Thank you!!!! *The doctor shall willing allow anyone who turns up to eat healthy ice cream.*

]]> c0fa079c06dcf9d8608b17c285cbad11 BlueJay posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85495/#acomment-85560 Fri, 16 Nov 2018 20:41:14 -0500 @perfectfifths
Yes, that was right. I’d be happy to send it through in the near future so you can read all the changes. (I believe it will be quite different since you’ve read it.)
Yes, we do. But I’m hoping that it’s going to pour with rain now. ๐Ÿ™‚ And end the drought.
No, I’m not doing that. I don’t want pressure when I write atm, just need…[Read more]

In reply to - BlueJay posted an update @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer @rolena-hatfield Ahem. I don’t know if any of you will recognize me (or are even still here) […] ]]> 1f37c222cbdddb758c507febaab40c0f BlueJay posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85495/#acomment-85558 Fri, 16 Nov 2018 10:38:30 -0500 @perfectfifths Yay!
No, not much. Still working on the Golden Conch. I’ve semi started the sequel to it. And I wrote a short story recently, but over the past two years, no not much. ๐Ÿ™

In reply to - BlueJay posted an update @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer @rolena-hatfield Ahem. I don’t know if any of you will recognize me (or are even still here) […] ]]> cce05d6067303238f69f31fac745eb5d BlueJay posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85496/#acomment-85556 Fri, 16 Nov 2018 09:23:35 -0500 @seekjustice I used to live in the country, but I live in the town now. (And loving it). Def a town girl at heart.

In reply to - BlueJay posted an update @seekjustice Hi. I’m also Aussie. I use to be on here quite frequently, but had to leave for 2 years. But I’m back now and if you are interested in writing when America is asleep… then just […] ]]> 6372b7919b0a213936d47fee1f8ba8d7 BlueJay started the topic Long Years Ago...... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/long-years-ago/ Fri, 16 Nov 2018 09:18:36 -0500 Hello,

Many years ago (almost two) there use to be a doctor on KP. Too many cookies @daeus and gavels flying everywhere keep her busy. However, there was the horrible annoying busy place in outer space called Life. And it swallowed her up.

Recently she has been able to emerge victorious and now has rejoined the writers world.

To all who knew me…[Read more]

]]> d7c87b3b8e5ab2b2c72e8c0ecc538acc BlueJay posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85495/#acomment-85553 Fri, 16 Nov 2018 09:12:22 -0500 @perfectfifths I’m well. I’ve missed being here with you guys. Life is about to get crazy, but I’m really hoping that I’ll be able to get writing well and truly back into my life.

@emma-flournoy That’s a good idea. It will give me a feel for who is around and introduce myself to the new people. Oh wait, I’m the new person. ๐Ÿ™‚ LOL

In reply to - BlueJay posted an update @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer @rolena-hatfield Ahem. I don’t know if any of you will recognize me (or are even still here) […] ]]> 553b01c88e9a919a5fbf0b57074a6c03 BlueJay posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85496/#acomment-85552 Fri, 16 Nov 2018 09:09:32 -0500 Well @seekjustice it was about 2 years ago!!! ๐Ÿ˜› I look forward to getting to know you too. May I ask, which state of Australia are you in? I’m in Vic.

In reply to - BlueJay posted an update @seekjustice Hi. I’m also Aussie. I use to be on here quite frequently, but had to leave for 2 years. But I’m back now and if you are interested in writing when America is asleep… then just […] ]]> 915c1d27393aa7f5e11345e31e587319 BlueJay posted an update: @seekjustice Hi. I'm also Aussie. I use to be on here quite […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85496/ Tue, 13 Nov 2018 05:50:41 -0500 @seekjustice Hi. I’m also Aussie. I use to be on here quite frequently, but had to leave for 2 years. But I’m back now and if you are interested in writing when America is asleep… then just just tag me. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 4 2623c0e2f3fd9bca25d9e87a7ced86dd BlueJay posted an update: @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths, […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85495/ Tue, 13 Nov 2018 05:17:53 -0500 @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer @rolena-hatfield

Ahem. I don’t know if any of you will recognize me (or are even still here) but I’m back….
I can’t tell you all how happy I am to be back here, even though KP isn’t running anymore.
To anyone I haven’t met yet, *waves hello* you’ll…[Read more]

]]> 9 d82491ec04515b642cf9ac2044253834 BlueJay changed their profile picture https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/85494/ Tue, 13 Nov 2018 05:13:12 -0500 0 9b247115f0c873af9c32f5d827a718a0 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75476 Mon, 23 Jul 2018 16:16:55 -0400 @nicolerivers03ย  Just taggin’ you again in case you didn’t see Kale yet!ย  ๐Ÿ˜‰

]]> 6d1e3c2398cf2eecd4dfa8696f0ba3b3 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75393 Fri, 20 Jul 2018 13:58:30 -0400 @dekreelย  Awww…thanks!ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> c2851e4f0364d43a35339870025e1515 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75312 Wed, 18 Jul 2018 15:46:24 -0400 Here’s some characters I wanted to share with you guys…my sister and I started their story a while back and I brought out the notebook recently.ย  Hence the sketches!ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

They are four siblings:

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ย 

]]> 496556786f7163d9166173512d8a3390 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75311 Wed, 18 Jul 2018 15:40:26 -0400 Here she is, @nicolerivers03!

]]> 33ca9757d16e5fe17adb4936040ce6cb Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75305 Tue, 17 Jul 2018 22:02:05 -0400 @nicolerivers03ย  Hey!ย  I’ll draw herโ€”she sounds like a ton of fun!ย  I’ll get her done within the next few days.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 67fbf7d1555b96718b4c9acb10fcac1c Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-73710 Sun, 03 Jun 2018 18:46:13 -0400 @leumeisterย  😍😍😍

]]> fe7f63bce843e590a12c0413b21313ba Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-73613 Fri, 01 Jun 2018 15:31:00 -0400 @leumeister

Well, I found some time this morning.ย  Here they are!ย  I wasn’t sure what age Echo is sooo she might look on the young side (and I pictured her kind of shabby but I don’t know if that’s what you wanted).ย  Anyway, hopefully they’re something close to what you were looking for!ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0ecb5acbbab609ff4eb94b913194c84a Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-73496 Thu, 31 May 2018 16:08:13 -0400 @leumeisterย  I would like to try one/both of your characters…but I have hardly any time to spare at the moment, as I am helping prepare for my sister’s graduation party this Saturday.ย  They do sound like awesome characters though and it may be next week before I get to them.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> f927fe292b0acad26bb7db4302d5c2aa Ingrid posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/80539/#acomment-80771 Thu, 31 May 2018 16:03:37 -0400 Sorry this is such a late response! I was in Tennessee for a week with limited internet access. Anyway, THANK YOU so very much for your comments and taking the time to read my story! And you were most definitely not too harsh. I needed some critical feedback. ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks again!

In reply to - NC Stokes posted an update @ingridrd Hello! I finished reading Substitute Wednesday, but I’m just now giving you the critiques. Oops. Because I canโ€™t make comments, I just typed up my critiques. Please forgive me i […] ]]> ed8550e40296a6f150bf158809b98276 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/3/#post-72903 Sun, 20 May 2018 18:50:45 -0400 @daughterofthekingย  Oh don’t worry about it!ย  Thanks again.ย  ๐Ÿ˜‰

]]> 6adbdf0054f31ba074ace99540434b5a Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/3/#post-72877 Sat, 19 May 2018 16:20:09 -0400 @kaya-youngย  Thank so much for reading and for the comments!!! ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> c5f9eb51930570740ff5098a53038750 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72844 Fri, 18 May 2018 21:27:02 -0400 @jenwriter17ย  Thank you!ย  And thanks again ever so much for reading. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 66dd9c5421b9fad914842e22c9f54d88 Ingrid replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/8/#post-72833 Fri, 18 May 2018 14:54:19 -0400 @jenwriter17ย  About the title, I’m actually thinking @skredder ‘s idea of Underneath fits it perfectly!ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 992c1fe8a7ba322a64dbb71aa0603202 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72832 Fri, 18 May 2018 14:52:31 -0400 @jenwriter17

Okay, I’m gonna kind of sort of *completely* copy you and ask you some questions about my story, if you don’t mind (since you’re the only one who has finished it so far)!

1.ย  Who was your favorite character and why?

2. Were there any scenes that felt unnecessary or just like a complete info-dump?

3. Are the characters (especially…[Read more]

]]> 958a079e57f3707750cd43bb2eaa8afd Ingrid replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72831 Fri, 18 May 2018 14:08:40 -0400 @jenwriter17ย  OH!ย  I actually went to England and France while we were in Europe, and of the two, I liked England better.ย  I live in Ohio so we flew to D.C. and then took a 7 hour flight to London.

We stayed in a London flat for a few days to sight-see and also to visit my “sister” (who isn’t biological but is an orphan who we hosted a while ba…[Read more]

]]> 0a0e9adbfb3b0e6602fe74cad261f169 Ingrid changed their profile picture https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/79993/ Thu, 17 May 2018 12:03:13 -0400 0 8d87cd0bead6bdf310423c905f0fffca Ingrid replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/7/#post-72717 Wed, 16 May 2018 14:12:08 -0400 @jenwriter17

1. My favorite character is Jax.ย  *hugs him* He is very headstrong and brave, while still a kind gentleman.

2. My favorite scene would have to be the one near the end when Uma and Rin say they’ll be friends forever…it’s so sweet and you really triggered a lot of emotion.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

3. Hmmm…no specific scenes.ย  Some sentences here an…[Read more]

]]> c90db7d80e67a68930ee5589d2b0198d Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72607 Tue, 15 May 2018 11:40:16 -0400 @daughterofthekingย  Okay, great!!!ย  Thank you.ย  ๐Ÿ˜‰

@kaya-youngย  Awesomesauce.ย  Thanks again!

]]> 5adda9fc80c6cb6c25aebe7535512267 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-name-exchange/page/11/#post-72527 Mon, 14 May 2018 14:20:28 -0400 @kaya-youngย  *rubs hands together*ย  Okay, here’s what I got…

Romina, Zora, Elodie, Alma, Melora, Maris, Winter, Lyra, Avalon, Odette, and Elowen.ย  Hope these help!ย  (And sorry I was late in responding…)ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 2e509b8a88135097ffb55b927165fdab Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72526 Mon, 14 May 2018 14:15:48 -0400 @daughterofthekingย  I don’t want to seem at all annoying or anything, but I wondered if you were still Alpha reading for me?ย  No rush whatsoever, I just want to see how many people I have reading.ย  Thanks!ย  ๐Ÿ˜‰

@kaya-youngย  I know you got pretty far into my story, but have you finished yet?ย  Again, no rush!ย  I just wondered.ย  And thank you for you…[Read more]

]]> 7f460ce9b9391e5e8d5582718b65e8b7 Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-72507 Sun, 13 May 2018 22:43:52 -0400 @daughterofthekingย  Oh that’s cool!ย  ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 18f59825513b62f5e804920fbbc13e22 Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-72379 Fri, 11 May 2018 18:55:42 -0400 @jenwriter17ย  Why thank you.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 7a9f58fdb4c5f26b6bb8fffa52d50a01 Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-72374 Fri, 11 May 2018 14:52:29 -0400 @skredderย  Oh ho, I like it a lot!!!!

]]> 3a4a49588f44e62be80bfd531ed5e5a0 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72296 Thu, 10 May 2018 11:36:23 -0400 @aliaย  Oh, I’m so glad you like them!ย  Yes, they do look similar.ย  Ha.ย  Funny.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 4766c3823374dd11f382b1a1e5e6f6fd Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72252 Wed, 09 May 2018 21:00:18 -0400 @notawriterย  ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> c7939228e2e3ef31cc7e5c5ca99aa93a Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72248 Wed, 09 May 2018 18:44:19 -0400 @notawriterย  Randal is from my fantasy WIP.ย  He’s basically the heartthrob.ย  XD ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 815213e7db1378eecce094ac87215bbd Ingrid replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/6/#post-72220 Wed, 09 May 2018 14:29:50 -0400 @jenwriter17ย  I am completely caught up on reading your story and I’ve gotta say….I am totally captivated!ย  Keep up the awesome work.

(And post the next chapter soon, will ya? ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ )

]]> 361cb570850fd3b8319053631150d8d1 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72219 Wed, 09 May 2018 13:37:26 -0400 @notawriterย  AHHH, he is indeed a cutie!ย  Thank you so much (and don’t worry about the wait…).ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

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