Kingdom Pen | Cahndida Serkhaman | Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/cahndida-serkhaman/activity/ Activity feed for Cahndida Serkhaman. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 eb7f80040d69ae942431857c67b35c18 Cahndida Serkhaman posted an update: I love writing poetry <3 https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/20811/ Tue, 03 May 2016 14:34:52 -0400 I love writing poetry <3

]]> 1 36e918afb918a29465fc4325a6c6e8f2 Cahndida Serkhaman and MarkMcGuire are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/17934/ Sat, 05 Mar 2016 01:04:13 -0500 0 13e725eede28eabc740682917de5abe3 Cahndida Serkhaman replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/id-love-your-help-with-this-poem/#post-9513 Tue, 01 Mar 2016 16:08:50 -0500 I would change some things…

The first verse… not sure what to suggest, but it sounds a little off from the rest of the poem. “And made Him so mad” is a huge understatement, which might work fine for this poem, but this line could be a lot stronger.
“Some seven of, some two” would sound better written as “Some of seven, some of two.”
“He…[Read more]

]]> de2639aed2d7f095cf4955cc6e61f9c2 Cahndida Serkhaman replied to the topic Hi all you fellow writers ;) in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-all-you-fellow-writers/#post-9458 Mon, 29 Feb 2016 23:31:59 -0500 😀
So how should I use this forum? Do you all use it to ask for critiques or ideas or what? 🙂

]]> 6a396fa6cccd608d446d02e6b5b575fd Cahndida Serkhaman and Lightningmouse are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/17691/ Mon, 29 Feb 2016 01:57:58 -0500 0 078c01593aac2ee426fca6bf49c22465 Cahndida Serkhaman started the topic Hi all you fellow writers ;) in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-all-you-fellow-writers/ Mon, 29 Feb 2016 01:37:19 -0500 Hi everyone! 😀 I’m glad to be on here! My username, Cahndida Serkhaman, is the name of a character I made up. On the OYAN forum my username is Stardust. (Don’t know how many people on here are OYANers but whatever…) Lets see if I can remember to call myself by the right username… 😛
I love writing and one of my poems is soon to be published…[Read more]

]]> 5c7bb4ce0c85f11da37920ea85df781b Cahndida Serkhaman changed their profile picture https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/17688/ Mon, 29 Feb 2016 01:30:23 -0500 0 d5c76bbd6a0b283f3ab52738fc678545 Cahndida Serkhaman replied to the topic Hi howdy hey. in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-howdy-hey/page/2/#post-9414 Mon, 29 Feb 2016 01:28:31 -0500 Greetings 😀

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