@brandon-miller
Active 8 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus I assume American’s call a blurb a synopsis? If so, this is great!
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Salutations, writers. I'm Xonos Darkgrate. in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate Weeeeell, I am a Moriquendi… I suppose that’s a dark elf, but not Umea. Umumea.
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper Cool. I don’t use MSG, I was more curious on whether you understood why it was written.
The original purpose of the MSG was not to be used as a translation. It was more just his contemplations and paraphrases of the Bible as he was reading it. So, cool to know your opinion. *thumbs up* -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *scowls* We are not taking over the kingdom.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate as someone who has read and reread this story, I can assure you it’s anything but simple. In many ways it’s a lot like most classical literature— the premise it’s built on is very basic, almost simple, and yet when you read the story it’s nothing you ever would have guessed.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rolena-hatfield I love your blog! Your Attic looks so nice!
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Snapper replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy He forgot to tag me too. Can we take over the kingdom now? How bout now? Now?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus *sniffs* You forgot to tag me.
But looks like I’m first to the party anyway, so here goes. XDFirst off, I really like it. The only suggestions I have are a few tweaks to the wording.
The first line, I think, would be better as simply ‘Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister are now…’ etc. It leaves out…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 will continue. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea XD Perfect.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar *nods* Totally valid reason. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@Rolena-Hatfield that’s awesome! I like the color scheme. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar heyyyyyy! I’m an INFP too. 😀 Welcome to KP; so glad to have you here. I’m a poet (of sorts 😛 ) as well. Why do you like poetry?
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Snapper replied to the topic Salutations, writers. I'm Xonos Darkgrate. in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate Welcome to the dark side, Xonos. We have ice cream.
XD
Well, you might’ve guess that this isn’t the dark side. We have too many elves and unicorns for that. But anyway, welcome! Glad to have you!
Cool name, BTW.
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Snapper replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@salome01w4g *waddles along, whistling somewhat innocently*
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Snapper replied to the topic Is My Main Character Well-Developed? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
Oh, and if he has PTSD does he get to have a Labrador follow him everywhere? 😀 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Is My Main Character Well-Developed? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar Ooh! He does sound like a great character. For someone who controls fire, he doesn’t sound like very much of a fighter, which I think is great, because when someone thinks fire, they think of a fighter. Nice and unique, that one. *thumbs up*
If you want to improve him, I’d discover some of his quirks. What does he do when he’s…[Read more] -
Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
Haha! You’re too quick! I just realized someone already asked you that, so I went to ask something else, but you’d already answered! hehe 🙂 Anyway, I’ve never heard of them. I’ll have to look them up!
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m just venturing into the Sci-fi genre. 🙂
Do you have any pets and what’s your favorite kind of ice cream?
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