@bluejay
Active 7 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Hmm, graphic as in violence or as in medical procedures? Because both are in there, but from your reaction, I’m guessing they left some things out. I don’t think there’s anything in there you couldn’t watch, although I guess the brain surgery scene might be disturbing. I know it made me feel weird. Now I’m curious. What was graphic about…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay I could post my brother’s lists from his grammar book, if you want. They wouldn’t be the same as the one I used, but I guess that wouldn’t matter. They’re around 20 words long, I think, but I could post them in 5 or 10 word segments if that’s too long. I guess it depends on how long you want the poem to be. 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Hudson Taylor…I read about him a while ago, so the details are all fuzzy in my mind. Didn’t he embrace the Chinese culture in order to evangelize, and the mission board/ establishment was offended by that? I need to read about him again. What is the name of the book about him? I haven’t read Gifted Hands, but I’ve seen the movie. It was…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay I really don’t remember; it was from some homeschool assignment a few years ago.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Ohhhh. Wow. I’ve been doing everything on our iPad; I had no idea you could even do stuff like that. Thank you!
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Well that’s good. Which people have inspired you the most, with your faith and everything?
We’re probably less than 20 minutes away from where we were, actually. We’re still in the same city.@Anna-Brie I haven’t been able to read much more than usual either. Hopefully once we settle back into a routine I’ll be able to read more, though.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
HOW DID YOU DO THAT??
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Sarah Hoven started the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Have you ever tried writing poetry from a vocabulary list? I had to once, and it was more fun than I thought. Here’s the result:
A Tale From Two Views
View One: The Tragic End To A Shrimp
A shrimp was lodged upon a ship
Which bombed the rival airstrip
He heard the bullets bang and zip
As bombers turned the gay flagship
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Okay, I’m stumped, so I’m going to fall back to my last, very embarrassing resort. My brother and I played around with starting a Creation Science website, but then we realized we didn’t have enough information to make a good website. So we used it as a “launching pad” to get his pictures on to KP. So (if it works) this is a picture of…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 8 months ago
@Bluejay, I wondered if you’d like to be e-mail pen-pals? I know you’re four years older than me; and we’ll in all probability never meet, as we live on opposite corners of the world; and I’m not a writer (of fiction at least 🙂 )…but I’d like to get to know you better, and correspond regularly, if you’d like that. Whadda-ya say, Tessa? 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
*Rushes in* @kate-flournoy @bluejay @draggon-snapper I’m ready to write now. *disappears in a cloud of smoke*
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ClaireC posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay, agreed! 🙂
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Kate Flournoy posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
@Bluejay yep, that totally makes sense.
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@bluejay, agreed! 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Sure. That’s fine. I doubt it will still look like a body though 🙁
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Daeus posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay No, that makes perfect sense.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Idea – Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
This poem describes my life…lightbulb!
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Ingrid replied to the topic The Idea – Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Wow, @bluejay! This is so good! And the shape…brilliant. 🙂
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Greta replied to the topic The Idea – Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@Bluejay Wow, I’m so impressed! That is SO cool. It looks like a lightbulb (I’m assuming that’s what you were aiming for 😉 ). Keep up the great work!
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Daeus replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Alright @bluejay. I’m finally getting to this now. First of all, the visual is amazing. I don’t know if you noticed this, but it doesn’t only just look like a cross, but it looks like a body on a cross. That’s pretty impressive.
As far as the poetry itself, there were some things that were done really well and some things that needed to become…[Read more]
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@emma-flournoy Sure. I’d like to do that. I’ll warn you now, I’m terrible a checking my own writing, so you’ll probably end up with a lot of spelling and grammar errors in the emails. Mum is trying to get me to slow down so she’ll read my first two or three emails, so they should be problem free. 🙂 (My fingers try to keep up with my brain and…[Read more]
Oh yay! I’m glad you want to… 😉
I’ll e-mail Sarah and ask for your address; how do I e-mail her? :/
And I’m extremely meticulous with my spelling and grammar, so we should be a good match then!
@Bluejay
Just email me at kingdompenmag@gmail.com! 🙂
Thanks @spradlin. 🙂
@emma-flournoy Can’t wait for the first email between us.