@bluejay
Active 7 years, 9 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariella-newheart Why thank you. 🙂 And I love your version of Aspen!!!
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Alia replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@bekreations, you brought it back! yay
“Woah, woah, slow down,” the man says, as he strides over to me. I glare at him.
“My name is Brek. This bag carries machine that, although it looks like a glowing rock, it is incredibly dangerous.” Brek pauses. “As for your friends, they are individually separated into rooms such as yours…” Boom…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic My Life is Novellas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17, sadly I don’t know. I try to write a short story and it becomes a series…
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Daeus replied to the topic My Life is Novellas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 Yeah, what Kate said is huge. If you have part 2 of my Show Don’t Tell Course, I have a whole lesson on live scenes there, but basically a live scene is the literary version of a camera taking in everything that’s happening in a scene. No time is skipped. An overview is like when someone tells you what happened at their birthday…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic My Life is Novellas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 heh… I’ve got the opposite problem. 😛
*scratches head* I would say probably the number one thing that makes my novels so ridiculously long is the crazy amount of time I spend really delving into the layers of chemistry in live scenes. I try to do all live scenes if I possibly can (no summaries, no overviews, no generalizations)…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 4 months ago
@notawriter Oh, I’m so glad you like her!
@sarah-anson Those are epic!!! 🙂
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Alia posted an update 8 years, 4 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YbMjh7XZezqkHRvlRP9khoomBNQdlZewkADTubmvzzY/edit?usp=sharing
@rochellaine, @ariel-ashira, @seekjustice, here’s the poem. I don’t go into very much, but it is a start
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine, depends on what I mean by the word early. Early morning? or early for you? in this case its both
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira
Ooo, Millie and Gideon are my favorite characters, too, and Adam’s close behind XD My favorite song has to be Sobbin’ Women because of how hilarious it is. What’s your favorite song? -
SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine @ariel-ashira Yessss! Seven Brides for Seven Brothers!! 😀
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine, you went to bed early???
I just realized that I only barely answered your question. would you like a more in depth answer?
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 4 months ago
@catwing I love those!!! 🙂
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira, @seekjustice, y’all are getting your wish. I’m writing a poem. I might turn it into an essay and eventually a story. but right now its a poem. I’ll show it to you guys when its done.
I have to go to bed now. night y’all
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice, well do you have anything in specific you want to know?
@rochellaine, I love the news with NK. I have only been able to visit there once, but I know they need healing. But it will be very interesting with how the people react. They have been taught since they were babies that Americans are evil. when my parents had their first trip…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira, I actually want to do just that. But I’m a fairly private person so it is hard for me to write down stuff unless prodded
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine, I think it is an opportunity, but as of right now, it seems as though most Ms are interested in S Korea and N Korea. Because is it so hard to live in N a lot of Ms set up base in China, but the goal is N. that’s originally how my family was until God shut that door.
I can’t say whether China has more Ms than other countries outside…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira, if you want to know more about something feel free to ask me
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira, well, it depends on whether you are talking about the government or the people. The Chinese government operates using Communism. The only way for that to work is to keep the people poor, over-worked, and hungry. There are really only two classes of people. Party and middle class. Party members have more privileges. they can “vote”.…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira, not so much anymore. But when we were missionaries we had churches all over America that supported us, so we tried to visit them every time we came to the states for furlough.
@rochellaine, poem? I love other people’s poems. may we read it?
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira, I have some cousins who live in Alaska, but we’ve never visited them. I think Alaska is the only state that I have not been to.
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@alia Thats is beautiful! Its also..sad? What home are you refering to?
Its the one I had in China. The parks reference my apartment complex.
It was supposed to be light-hearted, but as it progressed I couldn’t keep it that way
@alia I’m sorry.