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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien You guys are amazing here. You could do a physical piece of artwork and then write a short piece about it.
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Random suggestion: do a sketch describing the character’s experience in Wonderland. It might help with the worries you have. 😉
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
I’ll remember that, Elizabeth: don’t make it easy! (Do you hear that, Grace? And you were just accepting my control of your life!). Sorry, awkward character interaction for a moment.
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 6 months ago
@graciegirl I played “Solitude” several years ago, but that’s it. I like to compose my own songs in the style of David Nevue and Brian Crain, and I also play a couple composed by Dario Marianelli for P&P (please don’t label me as a Austen nerd, or someone who wants to marry Mr. Darcy. He actually kind of bothers me, though I do enjoy Miss…[Read more]
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Yes, @daeus, that was very helpful. Now I’m off to make sure my character has a goal as she’s struggling with shyness! And figure out how her goals will change as she changes.
@anne-of-lothlorien I love Stepping Heavenward! It’s on my “Top Ten Books I Recommend To Girls” list. Thank you too for the “reader feedback.” That reminds me…I have…[Read more] -
bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Thanks, @daeus I actually just listened to your lesson on conflict two days ago, and so the added insight was helpful!
If I’m showing her thought process, and then how she acts, and how she changes, is that sufficient “conflict” (I’ll use quotes to show I’m not discussing warfare) for a book of this genre?For example, the first part to my…[Read more]
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 6 months ago
That was fast! It’s easy to see you believe in the cause of the Kingdom! @daeus
I’m currently studying holiness in the book of 1 Peter. Something really eye-opening for me was discovering that grace to obey comes as we obey. We don’t wait around till we feel Christ-like, but obey right now, with the faith that God will work. I really desire…[Read more]
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 6 months ago
That was fast! It’s easy to see you believe in the cause of the Kingdom!
I’m currently studying holiness in the book of 1 Peter. Something really eye-opening for me was discovering that grace to obey comes as we obey. We don’t wait around till we feel Christ-like, but obey right now, with the faith that God will work. I really desire to be…[Read more]
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bethanys.inky.roses started the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Hello fellow scribblers.
I had an idea for a slice-of-life story about a young shy girl’s struggle with making friends, and her ups and downs in her walk with the Lord. My question is: will a story of that nature actually interest people, and will it have enough conflict?
What are some pitfalls I need to avoid with slice-of-life? Any tips are welcome. -
bethanys.inky.roses started the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 6 months ago
Hello KPers! I joined the forum a few weeks ago and haven’t yet introduced myself. But…I can remedy that, right?
I’m a young lady who loves Jesus, (ask me why if you like~I love talking about Him!) the forest, writing, and my family. I spend a lot of time playing our piano (who is named Elizabeth, just because naming things makes them more…[Read more] -
bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Bethany grins awkwardly first at @anne-of-lothlorien and then at @faithdk “Umm, I thinks I’ll try the spinning thing-thanks guys!” With 2.5 paces forward, a twirl, and a trip down four crumbled marble steps, she finally reaches the Volleyball Court. “Okay fellow Scribbling Serfs. I’m here. Where would a tall person be most helpful?”
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Bethany searched the somewhat confusing signs pointing her to the volleyball court. “Hello? Anyone else know where we’re supposed to go?”
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic The Notepad of Brainstorming in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Okay, examples coming soon! Thanks! I’m thinking of attempting to start a collab board in addition to looking for some. Pinterest is a SM site I actually use. I know lots of young Christian fiction writers…
Courier Rabbit, depart! @michael-stanton @stewie-plotter
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Wooden Coin Reward System – Magical Pamphlet in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
When can we start earning wooden coins? Should I just take a screenshot of my activity for now?
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic The Notepad of Brainstorming in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
In the form we filled out to enter the School of Stewardry, the Overlord mentioned Pinterest sharing/and collaborative boards. What is the wooden coin equivalent for activity of that sort?
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
She’s still way too far away to help, and too scared of the enchanted cloak to move. So Bethany watches, frightened, while she sees her fellow serfs plunge from the tower. But then she remembers that pitcher of ice she’s still holding in her sweaty hand. Somehow that gives her the courage to move from her stupor. “Even if I can’t actually help…[Read more]
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Trying to gather herself after her tumble, Bethany gazes up at the sky, where Audrey and Toast are being borne by a gentle wind towards…the tallest turret on the castle! “Wait! Jump off!” she yells. But can they even hear her voice, too breathy as always?
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
Bethany cowers in the dining car behind the carts of Coke, which, though she was positively parched, she would never drink. An inner voice scolds her: “Did you know what you were getting yourself into? You are not athletic at all! And what is all this talk of a Dark Overlord? Perhaps the other trolls can successfully ward off his anger with…[Read more]
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