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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@catwing My father was born a Muslim, and became a Christian in college. I have lived in a mixture of Middle Eastern and Western cultures since I was born, learning to change my behavior depending on which side of the family I was visiting. So I am drawing off my own experience and my study of the Bible for most of the cultural worldbuilding I a…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice @dekreel Sorry for disappearing. As you surmised, I did fall asleep. 😛
@catwing Thank you so much for your comments!! They are helping me figure out the setting and style better. I have a LOT of research I need to do before this will be finished. Thankfully, I do enjoy research. 😀
Are you here now?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Oh really? Well be thankful you never have, and stay away from it! 😛 It’s not a whole lot of fun. 😉
Ohhh!! The famous Stars Fill Infinity! The most talked-about book on this forum! The book I have written fanfiction for… 😛
Glad you’re getting a chance to read it. What part are you on?
What am I doing? I am trying to convin…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy Thanks! I think I will try to make it a little less obvious. Thank you so much for all the ideas and comments! They’re very helpful.
Haha. 😛 I love a good brother and sister relationship, so I’m afraid I don’t appreciate the scenes with your MC’s brother at all. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel 😀
Sorry if I take a while to reply sometimes. I am currently typing with only one hand because of poison ivy.
Working on anything tonight?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@catwing @valtmy @seekjustice Hey, I’m back!
@dekreel Hi!!! How are you doing?? You’re actually here!! 😀 😀 😀 (I’m going to keep being overly excited every time you show up until you make it a frequent occurrence. 😉 )
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy Okay, and I could disappear any minute. But here are a couple of questions:
1. You found out Yishay very quickly. Would it be more interesting if it were not so obvious, or is it fine as it is? If I had him just go to his house and wait for Bathshua would that make it harder to figure out? But that seems quite out of character for an…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy Are either of you around? I’m here for only a little bit, but I have a couple of questions.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice I sent you an invitation to the document. 😀
I won’t be here now for a while, though I might pop in and out. But I’ll be on later tonight.
Oh, I hope you feel better soon!! 🙁 Rest is good, though. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 I have a few remedies I am using. Hopefully it’ll go away soon. 😉
Sorry you had to go, but I guess I wasn’t really here anyway. 😛 I’ll probably be on later tonight.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’m doing housework right now, and that’s why my replies are sometimes far between. 😉
Sorry to hear about the cough, but glad it’s only temporary. 😀
My poison ivy is not getting any better, and I still can barely use my left hand. 🙁 (especially bad since I’m left-handed. 😛 ) But I learned something cool because of it. I took a…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 Oh, too bad. Bye!
@seekjustice @valtmy @catwing @dekreel Is anyone else around?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’m still here, in and out. 😉
That’s strange. Would you like me to try re-inviting you and see if that works?
I’d much rather have comments on the document so I don’t lose them in the mires of the forums, 😛 but if it ends up you can’t comment at all I’d love to hear your thoughts anyway, so in that case commenting here would be fine.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 I think I sent it to you. Hope you get it all right. 😉
I’m here, sort of. I’ll be off and on for a bit. How’s it going?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice @jenwriter17 @valtmy @catwing Hey people! The first section of Daughter of Judas is ready for comments!! If anyone wants to read it, let me know and I’ll send you an invite to the document. 😀
Warning: I do not write anywhere near as fast as SeekJustice or a lot of the people on here, so the progress is slow. The part you’ll be re…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy Thanks! I’ll have a look in a bit.
Hm, I thought I gave you some comments here on the forums. Did I not? I guess you still want more detailed comments in the document? Okay, I’ll be on a long car ride today, so I should be able to reread it and actually comment this time.
Thanks for reminding me. I often forget about something unl…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice That’s why I think the 50s or 60s would be the best times to travel back and live in. They’re far enough forward that we’d have sufficient enough technology so the culture shock wouldn;t be too great, and just at the right crossing point where women were free to do most things, but were still expected to act like ladies and the…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Sounds great! I’ll have to see if I can get the chance to read it.
I haven’t read any of Amy Carmichael’s books in a while, but I absolutely loved Mimosa!
Well, I think if I read it now I might have a different impression than I had when I was younger. 😉
Haha! 😀 I? Old fashioned? Why on earth would you say that? 😛 But yea…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice I haven’t been doing a whole lot of reading lately, and haven’t read many of the newest ones we have gotten, but I do believe I’ve seen that one among the collection. You say it’s good?
Ah, that’s sort of how I feel about Amy Carmichael. Have you read any of her books?
It has been forever since I read it, and my eleven-year-old p…[Read more]
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