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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, I will have to read that poem…but sometime when I get my strength back. Three strikes in one night might knock me out. 🙂
An earthquake opens up a crack in the ground and someone falls in.
Boy, am I going to have nightmares tonight! 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice This time I’m not going to wake my sisters up with my laughter, but with my sniffing. 🙁 I just finished the quick reread so now I’ll go back through and try to find ways to shorten portions of it. I don’t know that I’ll be able to, though.
In the heat of the summer a wild forest fire breaks out and a camper is caught inside…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel Okay, if you’re sure…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Yes, it works. But the story’s so perfect I don’t want to cut it down at all! I’m afraid to get to the end, because I remember it and know I’m going to cry.
…falling off cliffs, for one? 😀 Want to play a game? With each post we have to think of a new way someone can die accidentally. The person who can’t think of another one…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariel-ashira 😀 I don’t mind Dekreel either. I just pretend to. Don’t tell her that…
(I think she knows, though.)
No, it’s all just a joke. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel *frowns* *brandishes disbelief blaster* I made you disappear.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Ooh! I’ve read this story before! Several months ago when I was still wandering around the forums without actually joining…(I think they call it stalking? 😀 )
It’s actually not on edit, but I just requested edit access, so you might consider allowing me. 🙂
Well, the first thing I thought of was car accidents. Those often en…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrenluther04 And don’t forget about Stan! 😀 He’s a dragon too.
As for the Wonder, I love Alice and like in the original books I think of it as “anything can happen in a dream” rather than magic.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrenluther04 Well, I’ll try my best to explain:
Most importantly, I believe in magic, and believe that all magic is evil, so that there is no such thing as “good magic.” So, if you’re planning to have that in the story I’d rather you just leave me out of it. 🙂 Mythical humanoid creatures from real-world myths, such as trolls, elves, d…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Sure, I’d love to! If you’ll link me a comments google doc I can try to highlight portions that I think could be shortened.
Thanks for all the suggestions! I wonder if he could have killed someone by accident? That sounds like the most interesting out of the lot. But I’d have a hard time because I would have to find a way to mak…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrenluther It would appear that I have become the official KP sheriff! 😀 I find this very funny, because when I described myself to @dekreel I told her I was likely to call the police if something went wrong, not be the police! But it seems to work pretty well.
If I had had anything to say about it, the cat would certainly not have kil…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
It gets easier the more you do it.
That’s actually not the best recommendation. 🙂 Do you think I want to become callous?!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal Goodbye! Don’t forget to tell Stan to drop Bobert off soon. He’ll have to go to bed.
@seekjustice Nope. I couldn’t kill him. I think I could kill a villain. I’ve never attempted that yet, though. Maybe I should in the western. It would be easy, with horse thieves and guns, don’t you think?
And maybe, someday, I will get up the…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal *produces a very thick blanket conveniently out of nowhere because I’m an author and can do that* Here, we’ll just fold this up and put it on Stan’s back so Bobert won’t get hurt.
*lifts Bobert up onto Stan’s back*
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Hello! Things are great for me, but not so great for dear Uncle Bill, who I just dumped off a the cliff as I had planned. 😀
And @sam-kowal just beat me in a word-race. 🙁
Bobert is finally getting a chance to talk with Stan.
There’s the list for you! How are things in tomorrowland?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal Congratulations! 😀 Looks like I need some practice.
But anyway, I did end up throwing the guy off the cliff, so that’s over with. 🙂
*Bobert hugs Stan* Can he go for a ride now?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal I got 503 words written. How about you?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal How about cutting it off at an even 9:30? You’re on!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal *Bobert claps his hands and jumps up and down* He loves ice cream. But then, who doesn’t? 😀
So, how’s the writing going? Do you want to compete with me now, or just go at a normal pace again?
@dragon-snapper Sorry to miss you! Hope to see you again soon.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@mnvalentine @warrenluther04 Our cat killed a squirrel about a week ago…
(I feel like I’m Alice talking to the creatures in Wonderland about Dinah. 😀 )
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