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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 18 hours ago
Could you expand more on what you mane by that, please?
I like to write down every idea I have so that I don’t have to contain everything in my head and forget it. So, the opposite of Ellette. (Why are we always the opposite? Why??)
I organize the ideas by topic (plot, worldbuilding, etc) very deliberately. I’m trying to…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 21 hours ago
Great, thanks!! Yeah, I was trying to come up with something for the studying that would be interesting, but I’m not sure if I’ll change it next draft. I wanted to make something weird happen with the testing – the no answer changes being one of the first things I came up with – but I don’t know if it makes sense with the tests…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 22 hours ago
*Shivers* Ooh, I love outline brainstorming.
Do you have any habits that help you think more efficiently?
By this, do you mean a method of organizing your ideas? Because that’s my favorite way of making brainstorming quick and easy, while also productive.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
I didn’t draw your characters very accurately. (They are both supposed to be older, Leo probably doesn’t have goggles.) But I remember reading a section of the roleplay and having a specific image in my head, so I drew it, and here it is. Rory stands, Leo is on the stool.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
I’ll have to get that class moving, I suppose.
What’s with the neck thing?
Yeah lol, that’s my fault.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 22 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 1
“Why is it so hot?” Hallie Woodbury tucked a loose strand of ginger hair behind her ear.
“I only have two words that can answer that question: New. Mexico.” Easton straightened and tossed his light brown locks off his forehead with a quick shake of his head.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
bruhhh that’s dedication right there
Or boredom. It’s surprising the meaningless things you can accomplish when all your normal hobbies loose their appeal and you have nothing else to do lol
What’s with the neck thing?
XD That’s a super specific trope Whaley noticed. It makes more sense when you’re actually reading through the role pla…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 2 hours ago
Aaand this is not what this topic is for. I apologize for rambling, Shadow. 😅
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whaley replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 2 hours ago
Oh ho ho, well…
The thing is, I can’t remember everything that’s in Castle in the Sky, but the rest of the Studio Ghibli films have a lot of Japanese mythological spirits. Beings like No-Face, Totoro, or Mononoke are all considered spiritual powers. I personally do not mind these kinds of characters in literature, as they…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 2 hours ago
Oh, Studio Ghibli is amazing. I have a bunch of the movies on my shelf right now. Which have you watched?
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whaley replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 2 hours ago
Give yourself a foundation to build off of, otherwise you’re just building castles in the sky, and only Miyazaki can do that. 😉
Hehehe, I see what you did there
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
Alrighty, I read over the next two chapters and decided to post them both today, but after this, you can expect to get only one a week… unfortunately, I only have six more chapters after this. 🙁 I guess that means I need to write more haha.
Without further ado, here’s the link! (It’s the same one as last time …[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
Awesome! Thank you so much! That was something I really tried to pay attention to, because I come from a Christian family and I’ve never known a time where my parents didn’t know God… so it’s something I have to think about, how someone who’s never been exposed to this kind of thing would react to it. If you or anyone else has…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 11 hours ago
The TwinsEllie paused in the doorway of the classroom, and looked around, deciding where to sit.
The boy behind Eddie almost bumped into her when she stopped as well.
“Oh! pardon my blundering.”
Ed shrugged. “You’re fine.”
Ellie located some seats near the back and Eddie followed. Once they’d both sat, Ed smiled at the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 16 hours ago
@rae
Dante“What have you been up to?”
Dante tied the handkerchief around his arm while considering his answer. He eyed the hovering knife a bit nervously.
“Just getting ready for my trip. Pawned off a few things for cash. Not really sure what to do with the rest of the day.”
He plopped down onto the foot of his bed and rested his elbows…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 16 hours ago
Thou art officially dubbed the KP Archivist.
I am honored 😌
And don’t worry about replying! It’s only been like two days. You don’t have to role play anything if you don’t feel like it. Having a foggy sick brain sucks. Hope you get some rest and start feeling better soon! <3
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 19 hours ago
Thanks!!! ☺️
Thank you ladies! Sure thing!!
Wait really?? Oh I didn’t even notice! Maybe I’ll have to read the book now 😝
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Loopy replied to the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 20 hours ago
This sounds fun! I was never really a part of the original topic of the week discussions though so I don’t know how it works
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 20 hours ago
oh man, Alpha and Dante together are amazing!! 🤣
ikr? They’re so fun. I always forget how intimidating Alpha is until I start writing for Dante
Dante and the twins are so much funner to read about too!! I feel like I can really envision them better know that I’ve met their author in real life. Funny how that happens.
Yeah it’s w…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 20 hours ago
Yesss kp finally decided to work for me!
@everyone
So I wanted to show you guys a thing. I’m on page 100 of copying down this entire role play into a google doc, and I’ve been keeping tallies of different tropes/ things that happen a lot and this is it so far:
traumatic flashbacks of course in the lead XD
I just find keeping track of this…[Read more]
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