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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh jinx
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas It’s Irish
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aw, that was so sad! I really liked it though, tag me if you post more.
Oohhh, I like it!
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, it was mentioned in the dialogue, but I guess it might be easy to miss that.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
*Calls out @everyone* Switching partners, now!!
Hugo
He tried to teach her a simplified set. But even though she was a good learner, the music slowed down, and any “real” swing became impossible. They both laughed, shook it off and went back to waltzing.
From how the evening had gone so far, Hugo tried to form opinions on Nar. She seemed to be…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Thanks! I fixed the stall part in my document, but it won’t let me edit my post anymore.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
So, the king has been traveling for a while. He wasn’t aware of the rules put on the people by his regents, who he’d appointed to take care of the country while he was gone.
When I wrote it, I was trying to create sort of an allegory. I know it’s not perfect, but that’s what I was thinking when I came up with it. The king is meant to…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
One of my characters is just barefoot lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay. Weird. A razor knife isn’t a particularly dangerous weapon. I just thought it was funny that the school is allowing literally any weapon that isn’t a firearm, but not things like paper. Irl, schools tend to be super restrictive about weapons.
Lol I know it makes no sense. That’s what makes it fun, though. Calyhuge made the list up.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
I added a few sentences that hopefully resolve it a little better? I’m not sure. Do you still think it’s missing something?
… I can’t believe I didn’t see it before—who he was. The suspicion has grown inside of me for weeks, strengthening with each day that passed. When the guards disappeared from the marketplace. When the curfe…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Alright! XD Thanks, I appreciate it.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@rae Hehe ok. I can rp that soon
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lol, actually, the banned items are as follows: sandals, flip flops, boots, ropes, open flame, firearms, glass jars, high heels, papers, pens, books, animals or pets not enrolled as students, blindfolds, and hoodies.
But she doesn’t need to go to the practice of course. I could add some new characters and maybe they could meet in the s…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Christmas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Every year my family makes lefse together, which is a Norwegian flat bread which is pretty much a tortilla but made with potatoes. I like to put butter and cinnamon sugar on mine and then roll it up and eat it.
I think The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe counts as a Christmas movie since Santa is in it, so I’m going to say that’s my favorite.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@everyone
Two things:
If any of you get bored at the dance practice and want some conflict, Felicity planted banned items all around the room, so I could have my teacher character, Mr Gregory, stop and question some characters about it if anyone wants.
And I think I might add a couple of my Wonderland characters soon. Maybe.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Right now there aren’t any classes, except for the optional dance practice that a lot of people are at. If your character goes there, there are a lot of banned items that she can’t bring. A bunch of other students are wandering around town or going shopping. Classes will resume tomorrow in the rp, and at some point you’ll probably need…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Got it!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I knew it was pretty obvious. I’m not sure how else to write it (where it’s not obvious) in such a short word count.
So, yeah. As soon as I posted it I was like, oh, I need to add something that talks about how the rules/guards have been changed. Really when I wrote it I was thinking it’d have a few more scenes, but then when I got…[Read more] -
hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
It’s almost 2024 … 😳
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