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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay, I’m finally here!! XD
So, I was digging pretty hard to find something to critique, so I’ll do my best…
“A hint of fear is smothered in the master’s gruff tone.” – why the fear?? Just because of the curfew?
I agree that it was pretty obvious the man was going to be the king.
In first person it’s really easy to use “is” a lo…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
XDXD YES. You shall be one eventually, child of the pen. One day. I see it in you.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
IM A CHOSEN ONE
IM OFFICIALLY COOL
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
And classes start again after the dance, which is the day after tomorrow in roleplay days.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Not absolutely certain. There must have been one, but I can’t remember. And tbh if I don’t remember, I doubt anyone will because I moderate this entire thing XD Go ahead.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Most of the basic teachers are set up, lemme think… chemistry, math, history… and I’m guessing the other main classes, although I can’t exactly remember. For optional classes, Philosophy, Botany, Dance, Art and probably P.E. have been established.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Mr. Gregory
“If you would like to keep your boots, and you are not going to dance, I suggest you then step outside.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas Don’t worry, he won’t fight Riina. I’m going to do something else
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
He’s a grumpy old war veteran who can use magic but prefers to use weapons. He’s also the best sword fighter from his world. He only teaches math at this school to keep an eye on Felicity and Lois, my other characters.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas Mr. Gregory. He’s also known as the General to people from his world.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@lydibug Yeah, sure! They can be at the practice now. Should I rp, or do you want to?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
The General would definitely win a duel, but I don’t think I want him physically fighting a student XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae
Well this escalated quickly…
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hey, how was your holiday, btw? Wishing you a late Merry Christmas, lol ❤️
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Enid replied to the topic A Poem I Wrote ❤️ (Hey… got any ideas for a title?) in the forum Poetry 2 years, 9 months ago
Thank you, I had a lot of fun writing it! I used to catch a lot of pill bugs when I was little. Called them rolly-pollies. Goodness, I don’t know how to spell that XD
Oh those dreams must be so cool XD I never dream about my characters. I see yours reveal their greatest passions easily. How often do they communicate to you t…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Babs
Babs hesitated, then did the only thing she knew to do. She made a beeline for the closest friend.
Felicity stood watching Lois walk away. A strange look crossed her face as she glanced down at her still outstretched hand.
“Felicity…” Babs grabbed her friend by the arm, almost tripping over her own skirt. Which was pract…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Ohh, I see what you mean. I meant the main character isn’t looking at the sky anymore, but yeah, I’ll have to change that. Thank you!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
OH! And I have Hallie and Easton who I have not RPed for yet but will do so now…
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Easton
“So, are you glad you came? You seem very confident with that waltz now.”
“Yep!” Hallie flashed him her signature smile. “I’m glad you came along.”
Easton bobbed his head in a small laugh. “Anytime. But…” he peered over the heads of students. “Looks lik…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oki. I don’t know how y’all want to switch it up, but I have Fynn, Callista, Lukas, Ami, and Ev available for any other charries to dance with rn. XD So take your pick, lol.
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