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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
So now you stole a gun from me?
Well, it’s my world, so it’s my gun. And since I’m its author, I say it’s out of bullets. 😝
*makes another attempt to steal Leon and Rolf from you*
Okay. I feel like that wasn’t really clear . . . but then again, we did get a warning that the next town would be dark, so I guess that was it. I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
What… who gave you a gun, anyway? This is a medieval world. The best you should have is a sword.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
*inches closer to Leon and Rolf while you’re distracted*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
True, but it’s not like, direct. Idk.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Wouldn’t their deaths right now be kind of disappointing? They wouldn’t even die for their faith or anything. . . just . . . a grudge. For abolishing the slave trade.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Wyoh strikes again 😣 I didn’t get tagged.
It was a necessary act of terrorism.
But… now how are we going to save Leon and Rolf? 😢😢
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I already attempted to do so and got out-debated.Â
She took fake-Alec. 😖You don’t care about Leon?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@liberty *whispers* I think we’re just encouraging her. . . 👀😟
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
*wants to ask for another section, but is also concerned of what I might find in it*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I seem to recall it was you who invited me here. 🧐 XD
Poor fake Alec. At least fake Leon and Rolf get their freedom. 🤣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Alec is halfway across the world, Ellette.Â
Actually they’re not even on the same planet, right?You can’t seriously believe that you’re holding him against the wall right now. That’s just some poor civilian, or maybe one of the bad guys, (in which case you can keep him there.)Just put the gun down, and no one’s going to get hur…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
This calls for a new squad! Not the protection squad, because if I did that you would try to steal my characters.
The CHARACTER WITNESS PROTECTION!!!
*promptly rescues Leon and Rolf, gives them new identities so they can hide from you and they disappear into the city*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yay, Godly! So glad you’re back! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yikes. This is not looking good.
So Hassan paid the soldiers to look the other way?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Wow. That escalated quickly!
Seems like things are about to get rough for Leon and Rolf… 🥺
Why wouldn’t the slave trader just kill them instead of tying them up and everything?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Uh oh, it doesn’t look like it’s working again. But yay, thanks! I’ll check it out!
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