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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
no I haven’t!!!
Oki, I’m going to explain this structure because it seems to work for a looot of stories! 🙃 It’s very broad/all-encompassing, except for some Eastern cultures and the like.
I did not invent all of this. I listened to Brandon Sanderson’s writing lectures and explained them in my own words. So just to clarify, I…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I don’t like being super graphic/body horror about it, I just make sure my favorite characters come out of it with a tangible reminder of the incident.
Tangible reminder is a fun trope. I haven’t used it too often. I can’t remember the last time I gave a character a dramatic scar. It feels like something that belongs in the Keilah genre. :p
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
To be faaiir I do not even know who Alec and Everette are. Yet. I’m getting there. 🤣
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
But it’s so sad when the favorite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!
If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters.
But trauma doesn’t automatically make characters deeeeep… 😫 Actually side note, I’ve been thinking about this topic and we should make a thread for…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Maybe she just has a very common face 🤷🏻♀️🤣
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
That’s so insane… 👀
Lately my book has been feeling more real to me, but that’s just because I’ve been fleshing things out more. i didn’t think my characters were ACTUALLY being brought to life. 😳😂
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
He and Alec are my favorite.
I hope one of them dies in the end.
Why am I not surprised loll
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*Slips in* I’ve also met somebody who looks like one of your Hallie faceclaims. 😅 First moodboard, left, with the long red hair. It’s crazy how similar they look. I’ve had this thought since you started using the photo, but never thought to tell you for some reason.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I mean, if I bumped up the year the story takes place a decade or two, it would be even more realistic cuz then she’d be of marrying age!!! 😆
Oh no!! I have some characters from older WIPs that I would not like to meet 🫣😂
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle
No way!!! That’s insane!!! 😱 Oh my goodness that’s so funny!! 😂😂 That’s so crazyyyy. Wait what did her husband fiance look like?? -
hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka
Two new chapters this week! They should be uploaded to the doc now. Excited to hear what y’all think!
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whaley started the topic What are some interesting things you've learned through story research? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
What are some interesting things you’ve learned through story research?
I feel like there’s always something interesting in a writer’s search history. Very often, this includes creative character deaths, so if you’d like to share… XD Well, I’ll go first.First off. I’ve been researching the origins of the electric guitar (because I have a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I just got the cabbage stuck on the stove so we can eat in a few minutes.
*Snorts* XD
I’ll hang around here for a bit, mainly to think up a new TotW (Topic of the Week). I have a few other things to work on, like researching synth music, the earth’s atmosphere, etc. all for my projects. I’m waaay to concerned with…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago

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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago

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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Ohhh I get that 😂
Right now it’s a little easier “writing” since most of it is editing and moving scenes and such since this is a second draft, but *shrug* sometimes I just don’t have that inspiration, ya know?
Oh wait! You haven’t heard about this WIP yet!!
Ok I’m dropping the moodboards, hang tight.

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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c same….I reached a bit over 700 and kinda stopped ROFL I have another scene I should be writing but uhh…kinda lost steam XD
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
She’s g o n e *cue dramatic spooky music*
Just not forever 🤪 Or maybe she’s actually writing like I should be doing …
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c ROFLLL Bruh frrr like freedom was on and I said hi and now she’s gone XD
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