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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.
~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.
🥺
Thank you!
Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
*reads over questions briefly*
Oh, never mind. I see you already added those. 😝
I’m sad that the series is over. This was fun.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Okay, I’ll try to answer them after I eat breakfast.
Okay, I’m tempted to say something that’ll make y’all kill me.
Lemme guess. Questions for the overarching series or something like that?
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Melissa
“I goeth out of this tunnel… -eth” Mel wiggled the rest of the way out and retrieved her stick, which she had left by the burrow’s entrance. She looked the girl who had just appeared up and down with her flashlight.
“You talk funny. But I like your cape. I’m Mel.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m having more fun writing this imp guy than my actual characters lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
MelissaAs Mel followed the rabbit, it began picking up speed, and she found herself jogging to keep up with it.
There was something up ahead. A thin line across the path, reflecting silver in her flashlight beam. Mel slowed slightly, hopped over it, and continued running. Ahead, the rabbit turned suddenly right, and disappeared…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Word.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
We were able to get it to work, thankfully! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I tried to send them to your emails. So for you, it’s the Proton one.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint
Okay, I’m sorry, that was a bit of a mess. I tried to send a Word document with the two new chapters in it because Ellette can’t do Google anymore. There are two (?) links I sent. The right one is the second one, without a message.
Hopefully this works.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Yes, I was going to say, I can probably switch them over to Word. I believe you can comment anonymously on there if you aren’t signed in. Just give me a couple minutes.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh wait, can you even edit? 🤦♀️
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Huh. I don’t know how I could fix that.
I could open a section of it specifically for comments, and y’all could write them out instead of linking them to a specific section of text, but I feel like that might be more annoying for other people. Maybe I can copy any major ones over for you.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Pretty please, with a cherry on top, tell me what happens to Joseph and his family. 🙃
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Nice.
@ducktator @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint
New chapters are out. I wrote this week, so I feel like I have enough room to give you guys two.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
It might have just been something I thought, then. Not that I was saying it was totally unrealistic—I just know that last-minute conversions tend to be less … I don’t know.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
😢😢😢
Okay, I see where you’re coming from.
True, maybe… but maybe he’s done enough research to have found it already. I don’t know. I wanted to hear something about Joseph’s descendants, but it’s okay.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Either way, honestly. Whatever works.
I think it might still let you in, but I don’t know if you’ll be able to comment. I guess we’ll have to see. I’ll email you the link.
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