Faith

@elishavet-pidyon bruh SOOOB thank you for your words because that is the exact emotion I am trying to portray. and while it’s heartbreaking that is exactly what is happening…

My books do deal with some deep heavy themes…they do have their lighthearted moments though don’t worry! But…the world is a dark place, and my goal has always been…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal
Oh my goodness! 🫢 I can’t believe it… She’ll be in my prayers. 😥😥💕💕

@keilah-h I’m so glad he’s coming across that way!! @loopylin thank you! I love Anie’s accent too

@the_lost-journal Pax

@loopylin

“I know about a broken vending machine nearby that you can get free drinks out of,”

Waaaiiit… I think I know which vending machine this is. XD

@rae

Felicity 

“Uh huh. Real convincing.”

Chase looked uncomfortable.

“I know about a broken vending machine nearby that you can get free drinks out of,” Felicity continued. “I can show you if you want. Maybe that would cheer you up? Unless you’d rather go to class. Do you like soda?”

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Yeah, that makes sense. I’ve read the Ilyon Chronicles, which kind of has a similar vibe to your story’s time period and world, and one of the side characters (Christian) married a former prostitute after she became a believer. So, maybe it kind of reminded me of that, I don’t know.

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

Lois

“I, well…” Lois adjusted his glasses, avoiding eye contact with the others. “Leaving isn’t really an option for me. Especially when I’m older. My family…” he trailed off, and they walked in silence for a moment.

Then he cleared his throat and continued.

“This school is my escape, I suppose. I’m just…[Read more]

@beth-torres

You’re alive! Yay! KP has not been behaving itself lately.

The memes are wonderful😂

Thanks hehe

@rae Aww those are so cute! And the colors look so smooth. I love them.

@ellette-giselle

Yep lol.

Yeah, that makes sense. I couldn’t remember if it was an area he went through often or not.

Gotcha. Yeah, I get that. I was wondering if she might become a love interest for Julian, but if not, it’s probably better not to involve her too much.

@ellette-giselle

To be honest, I kind of guessed she was going to be a prostitute, so Julian’s reaction seemed a little much (especially to seeing her bare shoulder or whatever lol.) But then I reminded myself that it was different back then, so it made sense.

I would like to see her become a bigger part of the story, unless that doesn’t wor…[Read more]

Yayy success

@raxforge

Mateo would be right on the line of arson and murder, lol

I can add him in. XD it’s somewhat concerning how full those two categories are.

@whalekeeper

You hit the nail on the head. In-story, little Hugo steals rare spices because he wants to learn to make fancy pastries and tea leaves.

Hehe I knew it.

I could also see…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I’ve tried. I think she enjoys tormenting us 😂

@ellette-giselle
Ohhhh, okay. Wow, that is a longgg book. XD

@ellette-giselle

Oh, okay. Out of how many pages total?

And are these Word/Docs pages, or like actual book pages?

@ellette-giselle

Augghhhhh.

Wow, this book felt way shorter than the second one. Is that the case, or was it just me?

Out of curiosity, how far are we through the book by now?

@ellette-giselle

Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.

Also, if Albee is the one to tell him, then we don’t get to see what happens. 🙁

@theshadow

Really know your characters and try to build conflict between them naturally. (There’s probably lots of articles about that, maybe some even on here.) The better you know and understand your characters, the easier writing will feel, especially if you don’t have a super clear plot and are more just following the events of a certain time…[Read more]