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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Hehe. They might find themselves dancing generically when they wake up too.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I knooow it’s been vague, I’m sorry 😆 Teleportation just didn’t fit for him anymore. You guys deserve an explanation if I’m going to do this any longer.
Every person has a form called a lovedream, which is an exaggerated, fantastical version of their perceived identity. Or who they want to be. For example, Hugo’s lovedream looks lik…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
It’s all about why the darkness is there. Top questions when reading something dark: Is this melodramatic? If so, what does that say about the writer’s reasons for including it? What practical reason does the writer have for including it, if at all?
Tbh I see no problem with big bombs in a story, I have one in my project. It’s a magic…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium Oh I haven’t heard that one p. I’ll have to listen to it later.
Umm I really like Hey, Runner!, Envy Green, and Blue Eyed Girl -
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper Nice pfp :]
Teleportation was the only part of Seb’s powers I felt like I understood, lol. What did he just do to Caly’s characters? I’m not sure I completely followed.
Lois
He hesitated, fiddling with a pencil in one hand.
“…Sure,” he said finally.
“Yeah?”
“Yeah. After art class is done?”
“Sounds good.”
“Thanks, Marce…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium Yes! I love their music! Do you have a favorite song?
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I want to help a little bit more since you appreciated my help before! 😋 So I mostly had the same thoughts as Jonas. The greatest enjoyment I got from the prologue was the twist from ‘we’re doing this to save the baby’ to ‘what’s this baby doing here?’ That was great.
I only have a couple extra notes.
Please, Jesus, save my son, he begged, ref…
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whaley replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Aww that’s so sweet of you! 🥰 I’m honored to be called out in the acknowledgements, thank you so much!!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Teleportation is no longer something Seb can do. I realized it isn’t true to his character, more so when he gets older. Umm since he could teleport earlier in this roleplay, we can say he was given a 24 hour teleportation ability to get to the school. 👍
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Marcel
The other boy shrugged. “I don’t care as long as I’m not there for the romance part.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper
LoisThe slightest bit of color grew in Lois’ pale cheeks. He adjusted his glasses, resisting the urge to look at Felicity again. He blinked a few times at Marcel.
“I, uh,” He cleared his throat.“I thought you hated playing cupid.”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Hey I wrote additional stuff if this helps 😛
Marcel
Before Lois could react, Marcel broke down into soft chuckles. “Nah… everyone’s a fool. Hey. If you think a romantic skyline would do the job -“
A business venture suddenly occurred to him. He positioned his body to block the other students from sight, as if selling somethi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@rae Hey his face is really natural!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I wanted to give this character a break, but he’s the only one in music 😛
Sebster
A rustling yet clean note ended in a squeak. Seb lowered the violin for a moment, and regarded the newcomers with little emotion.
Although many of the music students had isolated themselves in quiet rooms, those in band practice stood out in the open,…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper *now somewhat intimidated* ok
@highscribeofaetherium thanks!
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Loopy replied to the topic Deadline Club? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint This sounds like a great idea! I need a lot of accountability too, though I’m not focusing on writing rn because summer is pretty busy. But I could definitely try to help keep you motivated! I tend to be forgetful, but I can try my best to be helpful
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Loopy started the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I feel like the title is pretty self-explanatory.
@rae Have you ever listened to Wolves of the Revolution by the Arcadian Wild? It’s a really good song and I keep thinking of you and Chase when I listen to it.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
*Devours the art* MORE MORE MORE
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Tbh I was wondering how you got into writing that fanfiction 😂
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