Ava Blue

FRIENDS

GUESS WHAT

I had a… I don’t know… revelation XD About story mechanics!! I had it like, a month ago, and I dismissed brain-storming further because I was busy. But now…

Okay, so think about this.

There are so many kinds of character arcs, right? Rags to riches, redemption, etc.

But have you ever considered other, additional ways…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

I don’t know why, but I pictured everything going frosty as the sun fell away, and the sigh coming from the first boy was so clear to me… If that makes any sense. XD❤

@godlyfantasy12

Oki-doki cool! Thank you ❤

So you’ve got Lyn and Nyx in order, but Ara and November need a push…

I think it would have to be something (or TWO somethings) that kick off their character development for that book.

So what ghosts are going to challenge them in this particular book? What are they each struggling with?

Then we…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank You!!! It’s an experiment. 😉

Is there anything you liked/thoughts/suggestions?

And yes, I think she is turning to kidnapping. XD

@koshka

Awww, thank you! For reading! My crazy opening! And liking it!

I’m glad you think so. Although I think there are some snotty Alwin chapters ahead. *Wry laugh*

Yes of course. That dreaded next chapter. Don’t worry, it will get worse. 😁😅

@hybridlore

Thank you! That means so much. I’m still trying to figure out my writing voice – or at…[Read more]

Hey Godly!!

Oh my goodness, pacing is SO HARD XDXD

The first think I thought to do was look up the definition of Inciting Incident. As far as I can see, an inciting incident is an event, no matter how big or small, that disrupts the hero’s status quo. It starts the conflict, but it can be either negative or positive, and it might not even be…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yw! It makes me so glad you feel comfortable sharing with me!! 💖💖

My first night without my sis was really hard too, I had a fear of the dark that really was helped by sharing a room with her (might have woken her up on occasion because of that 😂) so I was super stressed about it. Turns out it faded with time and I got…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Yep, I noticed 😉 I do that with my RPs most of the rime, even if it isn’t noticeable at all XD I’ve even used a specific metaphor which relates to one character’s canon death, which nO OnE KnOwS AbOuT. Just goes to show what you can sneak in for personal pleasure only.

As for your writing style… honestly, a lot of the time it’s just…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I am so happy you like them!! ❤ That means a lot to me, because I remember at some point you critiqued my writing, and I was a little self-conscious about the whole thing. So I decided to do better. Thank you for that little push, Min! (And if you have more advice relating to my writing, do not hesitate to wound my pride.)

Lol sorry…[Read more]

@calyhuge

My apologies. Perhaps Seb warped away before Katonia could say anything? I’ll say that was his canon response. And thank you for the healing jewel. 😉

@godlyfantasy12

We have Paxton, Fynn (I hope I spelled it right XD), Wolfie, Flax, Marc, Seb, and… Lucas! That’s who we forgot.

And I’ll leave starting the next day to you, our…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude your writing is just so unique, like the whole image of Marcel and Seb is so clear in my mind 😂 I can’t get enough of your descriptions lol

@godlyfantasy12

Uh Idk about Finn, (doesn’t freedom have a finn?) I have a Flax somewhere in there but he got kinda lost with the chaos 😅

@hybridlore

I really like what you have so far! If I were to include anything else, I would be sure to show what her emotional reaction is to the information in the beginning, so it’s obvious what kind of growth she has gone through. I feel like most people would have one or more of the five stages of grief (denial, anger, bargaining, depression…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium (your were)

Thanks!! This is my second (third?) Try at the opening.

@koshka @sunny421 @freedomwriter @godlyfanrasy @joycalle …iforgotyourtag @Idon’tknowwhototag

Hi everyone! I know I’ve been floating about in shadowy silence, so I’m sorry if I haven’t commented on some of y’all’s excellent work. Maybe I’ll be able to go back and give some thoughts as I’ve really enjoyed reading them.

Anyway, now that long and…[Read more]

Wait a sec, I had a bedtime RP ready –

But thanks Godly for the attention – writing these is my reward for finishing my new stressful schedule every day!

– Two Hours Later –

Sebastian

Seb was a simple man, with simple needs.

And those included snuggling up in a blanket, watching silent black and white films, eating three gallons of ice…[Read more]

@loopylin

❤️ I’m glad it’s so fun to read! Thanks Loops!!

@godlyfantasy12

Sounds good to me! Tbh, I don’t know if my charries could survive for much longer 😂

Also GIRL. I seriously thought Marcel would low-key be annoyed with Pax for the entire year – and while yeah, he isn’t exactly happy Pax’s aura in general, at least they’re cool now XDX…[Read more]

@hybridlore

humanities is literature, history, and I think philosophy and theology combined. It’s mostly just literature though.

Oh, wow, this got really exciting really quick.

Well I am very invested. I feel like I’ve been watching a really cool tv series, but I have to wait for the next episode to come out.