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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Felicity
Something hissed behind Felicity, tickling the back of her neck with its cold breath.
“What iss this I’m hearing?”
Felicity spun to see a large, frilled reptilian head peering out at her from the bushes. Well, it was facing her, but its large eyes were closed tight. A large, clawed front leg emerged from the bushes, and t…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
That second to last paragraph was really good, I like the way you wrote it.
Lucille
Lucy dropped the hatchet on the floor and walked several paces, realizing that it wouldn’t be too good to fall on it. A kid in the east fields had fallen on his father’s ax two years ago and there had been many cautionary stories before that.
She slid to…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I also have some good ideas basing off Whaley’s poem.
Be my guest! I just riffed on what I remembered of the characters lol
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Violent of the “kill everything” type.
XD Oh Gabriel, you force of nature
Lucille
Lucy peered out the window at the crows. “They’re real handsome birds when they’re not so close up.”
She eyed the room’s mantelpiece noticing a handle sticking from the ornate wood. It was a small silver hatchet. Without hesitation, she yanked it free of it…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Writing an exit rp for Felicity rn
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Can you guys describe your characters?
Oh! Yeah I can do that. Barnes is just a tall woman with chopped blonde hair. Wears very old-style clothing from maybe the 40s, a suit in this. Also a white mask with dark eyeholes. Little Lucy is literally the same but without the mask and with even shorter hair.
It’s cool you want to draw this! B…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Ok, cool! I didn’t want you to feel abandoned, lol. I will keep role playing until your character have someone else to interact with, though.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I’m good with anything that happens as long as Lucy stays with Gabriel. She’d be none too happy if they got separated
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
5 is Ayla, Ducktator’s character
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
You can always make them lose their way and come back to them another time. The mist could warp time and they’d wander around without doing anything significant for days on end. So you can do something else in the meantime.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@keilah-h WoF is so nostalgic for me ❤️ I love that
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I kinda want to pull my characters and just occasionally write things for the labyrinth’s inhabitants. I keep getting more fun ideas for more creatures and side characters for this. But I’d also feel bad for pulling characters so idk
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Oh yeah that totally works. None of what you guys have written has gone against what I imagined at all so far. I just wanted to say something just in case.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@keilah-h I know these ones I think
stanza 1- Felicity. Cuz the white hair
3- Mel
9- the Protector/ Gabriel
10- Lucy/Barnes
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
The way I’ve imagined it, the labyrinth is really good at acting like it has a mastermind. It’s not a person and doesn’t have a person behind it, but it can mechanically detect, reflect and manipulate real people’s thoughts. No one within the story wrote the poem; it just spontaneously manifested because of how the labyrinth…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
suspecting the owner of the labyrinth might be in the house.
Not that your characters would know this, but, just clarifying, the labyrinth doesn’t have an owner. It’s sort of sentient on its own, kinda, and more like a force of nature than anything else.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy did as she was told and more; she slid every candle into her trouser belt and pockets. The flames flickered around her waist like a burner under a pan and she hissed with restrained laughter.
The poem didn’t make much sense. Was it about people who had already escaped? Had they died? She recognized Gabriel’s title, but the res…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
My hand is fine now. I was rather miffed because I burnt my hand yesterday too, pulling steak out of the oven. It’s never bad burn, just painful for ten minutes or so.
Baking is indeed fun and time-consuming
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I apologize for the bad poem. I wrote it quickly and didn’t want to spend forever fixing it
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