@audrey-caylin
Active 7 years, 10 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Josiah DeGraaf started the topic Theme Mastery Q&A in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years ago
Hey all,
First of all, I just want to say how awesome it has been to be interacting with you all over the forum over the past month or so. 😀 It’s been great to hear how helpful the lessons have been to you and I’ve enjoyed working with you all on our story’s themes. And on top of that, all your feedback in the Google surveys has been super…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf started the topic Theme Mastery Q&A in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years ago
Hey all,
First of all, I just want to say how awesome it has been to be interacting with you all over the forum over the past month or so. 😀 It’s been great to hear how helpful the lessons have been to you and I’ve enjoyed working with you all on our story’s themes. And on top of that, all your feedback in the Google surveys has been super…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nine: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin Every time you use that book, you remind me that I really need to read it. =P Great work!
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper I have read Lord of The Rings, but I like the hobbit better, and I hope you find your way out of the bog of ideas. Did you know that before Tolkien died, he going to write a time-travel book that connected the Middle Earth world to ours? @audrey-caylin, @ingridrd, thanks so much for the welcome posts!
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper I have read Lord of The Rings, but I like the hobbit better, and I hope you find your way out of the bog of ideas. @audrey-caylin, @ingridrd, thanks so much for the welcome posts!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Audrey-Caylin oooh, I like it! Lovely!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Okay guys, let’s try something different here. We’ll pick a topic/category and each of us will try to think of something different for that one category, and when we’re out of ideas someone can suggest a new category/topic.
First topic— trains.
My contribution to the topic: The Train from Nowhere was late for the second time in a…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Okay guys, let’s try something different here. We’ll pick a topic/category and each of us will try to think of something different for that one category, and when we’re out of ideas someone can suggest a new category/topic.
First topic— trains.
My contribution to the topic: The Train from Nowhere was late for the second time in a…[Read more] -
Anna Brie replied to the topic I Am Searching For Beta Readers in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Audrey-caylin I’d love to beta read for you. I’m trying to get editing experience. I’m unlikely to get it done in that time frame though. Not something of that length.
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin What Brianna and Kate said :p So yes please post them here and we’ll definitely take dialogue prompts as well! We’d be super glad for your help in coming up with inspiring ideas. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Audrey-Caylin what @TheLiteraryCrusader said. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Anouncement in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin Well, not sure yet. Sometime before the end of the month. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Seven: Negative Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin Yeah, Mockingjay especially certainly has a negative arc. In addition to the ones I mentioned in the video, King Lear (really, all of Shakespeare’s tragedies), Oedipus Rex, the Dark Knight, and Morte d’Arthur are all examples of good negative arcs.
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Daeus replied to the topic I Am Searching For Beta Readers in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin Cool. I signed up.
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Daeus replied to the topic I Am Searching For Beta Readers in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin I’d be interested. 🙂 To be honest though, I’m not sure I could finish it in a month. I probably wouldn’t be done with it until about May 1st. If that’s ok with you though, or if you’re fine with only getting feedback on the first half, you can count me in. (There is also a chance I could get it done in time.)
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin I think that would be a good way of doing it. In that case, it would probably more be the first step she’d be taking, and one you would develop more in the sequel.
I would say the novel as a whole would still be a positive character arc even if half of it is a negative arc. If you think about it, you can really divide a novel into…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 1 month ago
@audrey-caylin That looks like a fantastic outline. Makes me want to read your book! I love how naturally those experiments flow into each other, and at least on paper, the plotting seems perfect!
The one thing you’ll want to watch out for is the fact that the story seems to be more leading from one experiment directly to the next one without a…[Read more]
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GabrielleMassman replied to the topic Awkward Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 1 month ago
@audrey-caylin Thanks!
@Emma-Flournoy I know…. I am running into the same problem. There are about 10 books on my reading list that are screaming to be read, and maybe a couple hundred others tugging on my brain and begging to be read, too.
You should still watch the two movies; they are still worth it. Combeferre is sweet, and so is Jolly.…[Read more] -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Discussion for Video Five: Character Arcs in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
This is kind of what @Audrey-Caylin already said, but pain changes people too, though sometimes not in the right way. Bad experiences can motivate a person to change for the better, but pain can make people change for the better or the worse. If a person is hurt by their friends, they’ll be more likely to use caution in future friendships, which…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Writers Score Results in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@audrey-caylin, I got a 78. @bluejay and @sarah-h did you do it? If so, what did you get?
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