Audrey Caylin

*crashes back in* I am writing again if anyone wants to join!

@rochellaine

Farewell 🙁

@jess-penrose

I should probably get lunch too. Bye!

@rochellaine

Farewell 🙁

@jess-penrose

How’s your writing going?

Ah, see ya! @rochellaine

And I actually must be heading off for lunch now. @seekjustice but I should be back soonish.

@jess-penrose

Ah no, I don’t think she did. It was fun anyway though!

@seekjustice Haha, right. Sorry, I take it Jane did not pick up that habit from KP…wonder where from then… *shrugs*

@jess-penrose 🙂

@catwing I have trouble with showing not telling as well, so much of my editing involves fixing it! You are not alone in this struggle!

@Rochellaine i don’t think we were supposed to, but Jess did and I liked my last line so I did too!

I hope your confusion lessens some time soon 🙂

@catwing Oh yay! I’ll happily look through it again! Hmm… It could be good. Have I mentioned anything about passive voice? And goodnight!

@rochellaine Hahaha, no clue. I just tend to whenever I war with my cousin. So, she may have invented that, or maybe she got it from somewhere else… but I always tend to do it anyway ‘cos it can be fun to read them.

@seekjustice Oooh nice!

@jess-penrose

My last line was:

above the din came Errol’s voice, but I could not distinguish his words from the rest of the chaos.

your last line is very interesting too 😉

@Rochellaine

Sorry, you’ll thank me one day though (or maybe not)

@rochellaine Woah! You must be a fast writer! 447 is my top record for a ten minute word war.

@catwing Oh yeah. I can’t say I enjoy it when I have to go back through and cure my work of random zombies that decide they want to mess up my story. *glares suspiciously at them.*

And if you want me to have another more thorough go-through of it I’m quite happy to. I’m on holidays now, so yay! Not as much school work to get done this time. xD

@rochellaine *pats* That’s alright! You still have gotten words written!

384 words

Last Line: ‘I told you to get home late. ‘

Good job @seekjustice

@jess-penrose @rochellaine

Me too! I got 375. How’d you guys go?

And I have stopped. @rochellaine @seekjustice

@jess-penrose @rochellaine

Ten minutes, sounds good!

@rochellaine @seekjustice (Nevermind. I should know by now to leave 5 mins to decide.) Alright then!

@rochellaine @seekjustice Does that one work for you both?

@seekjustice
Alrighty then ;P. In that case that makes it easy to work out when from and to.

:16-:26 ?