Audrey Caylin

@daeus yes, that makes sense. Thanks!

@dragon-snapper I have yet to try index cards. I kinda get…scared of them. You know, after putting ALL my school notes on them I decided I don’t get along with them anymore. But it might just be the perfect thing for editing 😉

@ethryndal yes, comments are great! My only problem comes when I need to delete…[Read more]

@anyone-left I’m stopping for the night.

@dekreel Nice to meet you too! Best of luck writing the story!

@dekreel that would be totally alright!

I LOVE the idea for the Keeper Adventure! (that concept drawing is great) I bet the story is going to be awesome 🙂

@dekreel I think I’ve seen a thread for that somewhere. Is that something like what Dragon Snapper did what the Legend of King Daeus? (I haven’t been on the forum in a terribly long time so I’m really behind on everything 😛 )

I’d love to make an appearance of it fits the story 😀

@dekreel okay, I’ll be careful. 😛

Alright, cool! I’ve begun to revise my plan, and your help might be just what I need 😉

@sam-kowal hi and bye! 😀

@shannon Hello!

Thanks xD (It’s mostly a true story–it occurred in a forum thread a while back)

@dekreel that’s very cool! I’m glad you’re…not evil now 😉

My backstory consists of once owning a flying cape and an invisible sword (I stole them from the Evil Overlord). Then, on a mission into a flying castle in the clouds, they were taken back from me. I’ve been pondering how to retrieve them ever since. 😛

@dragon-snapper Oops, I didn’t know you were here. Hi and bye!

@dekreel hello! Nice to meet you too! Oooh, you have claws? Might I ask how you came to have them?

@dekreel @that_writer_girl_99 I’m doing a bit of editing, if you’re still there 🙂

@kate-flournoy hmm…Destroyer does seem a little aggressive. It makes me think more of a sci-fi novel than anything else. I do see what Jane is saying about Victorious being a little too early though. I will…return when I have more thoughts 😛

@kate-flournoy I’m dying to read your book now because THE THEME.

Anyway.

I like “Victorious,” but also all the dozens of ideas suggested above are cool. My only contribution is “Vanquished.” I guess it depends on what sort of image you want to bring to mind with the title. Maybe imagining it on a book cover will help?

@supermonkey42 I actually just beta read a novel where it was like this: the MC’s scenes in first person, and then other scenes in 3rd person. It rolled along fine and was very intriguing. So long as the reader knows who’s who, I’d say go for it 🙂

@ingridrd that’s great! I definitely want to read this one day 😀

@ingridrd Writing a synopsis is super tricky. Yours does an excellent job of hooking the reader–I’m really interested in your story now! 😀

I like the first sentence a lot. The next paragraph gets a little confusing. Are all the things listed there what is already upside down about Jaclyn’s life, or what just turned upside down? I think if…[Read more]