Arien

@freedomwriter76

He’s just so lovable! 🥰🥰🥰

🥰🥰🥰 Yess!! Thank you!! <3<3

Uh oh…😬😬😬

Yeah…😬😬😬 (So this scene is actually when Dylan realizes that this is not the life that he wants to live…it’s the beginning of the end of his other life…and the beginning of his journey in Christ, which I’m soo excited about :D)

Yeah, I get that!!! It’s hard…

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@freedomwriter76

They could meet Asher and Matt and Lila and Kiri…maybe someone else…idk. Whatever you want to do! 🙂

@freedomwriter76

AHHH, BRENNNN!!!! 😱😱😱

VANCE!!! 😡😡😡💢💢💢

I know!!! He’s so precious 😭😭😭.

And IKR!?!? He’s AWFUL!!! 😡😡😡

@godlyfantasy12

Aww Bren!! Aaron!! They’re so sweet!!! 😭😭😭

@thearcaneaxiom

Oh, please tell me about how many bird species you know!

Sadly I haven’t been birding in a long time because it’s not safe to go alone, and uh family issues… so yeah it’s been a hot minute. We live near a super cool wildlife refuge though, it has so many birds! I’ve seen a couple great horned owls there, if you go in the winter…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah, that’s probably where I go wrong sometimes. I’ll occasionally rant at people I never met before, then they try to get out of the conversation.

Yeah, it’s always a bit hard to tell. If it’s a specific forum question (Ex. How to wright a good villain), it’s ok to rant. Also we have a topic called the “I’m giving you per…[Read more]

@loopylin @thearcaneaxiom  @e-m-trempke

Yes, I have Prime Video. Thank y’all! I’ll try to find it sometime.

@esther-c

Oooh. That sounds so interesting!! I enjoyed reading it and am now even more intrigued in your story!! Dylan sounds really cool! 😀

Thank you girl!! Oh good! Yeah, Dylan is pretty cool lol. 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! Yeah, that clears things up a lot. Sorry if I made too many assumptions, thanks for elaborating! Does 5 not seem a little old though? That’s the age most children begin school. You say that he still remembers, but comprehension of mom, dad, and sibling names would long since been well ingrained into his mind at that point. I…

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@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 Ahh I am so sorry!! I meant to RP before now 😅.

Vance

Bren stopped struggling as I held the knife close to his neck.

“R-Ronnie…?”

“It’s alright Bren,” His brother said, though his face expression said otherwise. “It’s…it’s gonna be alright.”

He turned his attention to me, glaring. “Let. My. Brother. Go!”

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@WHALEKEEPER

MEEEE

@thearcaneaxiom

That’s good to know, thanks! Even then though, I sometimes feel like I might come off a little pretentious when I’m either sharing or critiquing.

I get that! Sometimes it’s hard to feel how much to share, imo if somebody asks for help, you can go all out on whatever they asked for help with. I’m a little cautious, so unless it’…[Read more]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

XDXD glad the suspense is getting you lol! That might have actually been the last one lol 😂

@thearcaneaxiom

it’s fine! I think people were just confused because we do have a forum just for critiques, where most of that happens. People are pretty open to any advice here though, we all want to get better and others incite is always useful!

@freedomwriter76

Aww Riker!!! I love him so much <3<3

And Franz!!!! You better be nice!!!

@thearcaneaxiom

Aww no, don’t feel bad!! I loved all the questions!!! I mean, KP is a place where we can help each other and encourage each other in their writing! 😀 The questions helped a lot with Dylan’s character arc! I’ve already figured it out a lot more :).

Yeah, he doesn’t know that what they’re doing is wrong (Or maybe his…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YEP, TONY!!!! 🥰🥰🥰 (stuck with a bunch of teenagers…😅😉🤭😂)

🥰🥰🥰 (Poor guy XDXD) And, would it be weird if Matthew recognizes him? He’s a modern 14 year old who loves LOTR and Avengers…so he would recognize him…unless it would be weird 😅😉🤭😂

Oh, I can tell. 😂 But I make it obvious about Steve/Bucky, so…🤷🏻‍♀️

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@freedomwriter76

Well that was my first time writing any kind of a fight scene ever 🤣 feels good making your character look cool XD

@loopylin

Yw! I was hoping I’d get to go first because I had so many ideas for it lol

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks lol! I love writing him so much. He’s like mature enough to make proper decisions but immature enough to smirk every now and then over something petty XD

@freedomwriter76

TONY!!!! YAY!!! 😅🤭 Yeah, Tony Stark is one of my favorite’s…if you couldn’t tell XDXD

Ugh that will be hilarious!! Tony with a bunch of teens XDXD @mineralizedwritings Bahahaha That’s hilarious girl!! Tauren is so fun XDXD.

@freedomwriter76

LEO!! 😭😭😭😍