Ariella Newheart

@itisastarrynight  Awww! Thank you! She’s awesome!

@daeus COOL! I really like it 😀

Everything looked fine to me 🙂 Good job!

@rochellaine
Oh yeah, P.s I suppose.. I just wanted to say I realize, that was only the first few pages so I don’t mean to imply your story doesn’t have those first few things I mentioned.  You just might want to introduce those elements sooner, or foreshadow them?

Whoa, I think that’s the longest post I’ve ever made. o-o

@rochellaine
Alright! I just finished reading it, and overall I liked it! There were a few things that stuck out to me though.

Okay the two main things, its not very clear what her goals or motivations are. (Which is something that can weaken what would otherwise be a really strong character)

And then there doesn’t seem to be any source of [Read more]

@bella-d  Dark Ages…

Surfs, Dukes, Black Death, peasants, stone castles, black knights on black horses… and everything that @skredder said

@jessi-rae  That’s okay!

I’m not on the forums, but Aislinn and Iliara and a few others are. they should be quite easy to spot 🙂

@jessi-rae  Ah, cool 🙂 Are you on the forums?

@seekjustice  All right see you later 🙂

We’re getting a total eclipse where I live 😀

@rochellaine Aww, missed you! Bye!

@seekjustice ‘Ello!

BTW did you/are you going to see the lunar eclipse? Or it that possible in Australia?

@nicolerivers03  It’s beautiful!! Is there more of it? 😀

@seekjustice  *yawwnnn* Still here?

@perfectfifths  @clairec  @jenwriter17  @aussies  @nightowls

@jessi-rae  I saw the word “roleplay,” and that raised a random question: Do you play The Aetherlight…?

You know you’re a writer when you hear or read someone say “legit,” and your Perfect Grammatacallion self just wants to pull your hair and strangle them and scream, “That’s ‘legitimate!!’ ‘LEGIT-IMATE!!!!!'”

(No offense to anyone here who likes saying that)

@emily… Even though you’re on a hiatus 😉

@rochellaine Okayy, finished with this chapter! Good night! See you tomorrow 🙂

@seekjustice  Awwww, I don’t wanna go to sleeeep!

Read them, or else *draws claws*

G’day!

@seekjustice  I have survived on the Wingfeather Saga and Les Miserables instead 😉

BTW have you read the Wingfeather Saga?